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Cravings

I want you
I crave you
And I get what i want
You spot me
We meet each others eyes
As i walk closer
Fangs gleaming in the moonlight
Your mind tells you to run
But your body won't move
You're under my spell
I have control
Now we're face to face
You look at me with frightened eyes
It almost makes me sad for you
I'm the predator
You're the prey
I tilt your head back and touch the nape of you neck
My fangs become further extended in anticipation of whats to come
I cant hold off any longer
I bite
You feel a rush through your body, I'm the strongest type of ecstacy
You can't resist
As i such your sweet tasting blood
I'm on cloud nine
I lick the remaining blood off the holes where my fangs penetrated your skin
I look in your eyes once agian
But this time i see wonder and awe
Now your the one who's in control
I'm under your spell
I can't resist
Our lips meet and sparks fly
It's like nothing I've ever felt before
But it comes to an end when the stars give way to the morning sun
{your pesece now gone, but your memory shall remain}

ALTERNATE ENDING
{I leave you standin there confused.
 You touch your neck where the holes once were but have now disappeared
 It's mark faded but it's pesence lives strong
 You shall never forget}











































— xXsierraXx, Jun 04, 2010

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