Is It Wrong

Is it wrong to hate someone so much that you wish they would die?
Is it wrong to hate someone so much that you would be happy i they died?
Is it wrong to throw a party in celebration?
In celebration of their death
Is it wrong ,is it really?
When u think of what they've done to you
Compared to them is it really wrong?
I don't know so I'm asking you
I wonder why i even care
I cant get it out of my head
The horrible things i want to do to them
The torment they've put you through
Can what we're thinking about
In the darkest corners of your mind
Really be wrong?

— xXsierraXx, Jun 19, 2010

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Beauregard

15 years 11 months ago

A little polishing

will go a long way with this piece. Line two: "...happy [if] they died?" I can offer you so more suggestions, if you'd like. You're not evil. Anger, hatred, vengeance, these are feelings everyone feels, it's those that act on those feelings that are "evil". Every time I see my grandfather I think of all the horrible things he did to my mother and I want to kill him. Every time I think of a new terrible, disgusting way I could do it. But I don't. You've got to move on. Live your life and love yourself. Staying in the past is letting those people that hurt you win. They will keep hurting you, in your memories, but only if you let him. You're better than they are and you can beat them. The best revenge is to live a long, happy life despite their attempts to destroy you. Kelsey "In criticism I will be bold, and as sternly, absolutely just with friend and foe. From this purpose nothing shall turn me." -Edgar Allan Poe "If technique is of no interest to a writer, I doubt that the writer is an artist." -Marianne Moore