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May 30, 2010
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Moon-struck
One glimpse was enough
to mesmerize me
before she slipped
into silken wisps
Her turn on smile
was holding my gaze
she'd caught me feasting
on her hide
As she tip toed her way
on the starlit ramp
she held my breath
with her charm
The show went on
late into the night
my eyes couldn't latch
on her hind
She had me hooked
to her lithsome moves
and that "come on" look
in her eyes
The night wore on
way into dawn, till
I eased my pallete
by her canvass
I laced her lips
a translucent pink
before laying her
by my side....
— raj, May 30, 2010
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Critiques
magics02
16 years ago
Hello Ocean
raj
16 years ago
Hello Mona..
mona
16 years ago
I,m always.... "smile" even in the most hard days......
raj
16 years ago
Mona
mona
16 years ago
Mona
hobo
16 years ago
This is beautiful
raj
16 years ago
thank you for your succinct
xXsierraXx
16 years ago
confused
raj
16 years ago
thank you
xena465
16 years ago
Dear Raj
raj
16 years ago
nice comment…thank
panaella
16 years ago
moonstruck
panaella
16 years ago
moonstruck
Eugene Docena
16 years ago
Very Nice!
raj
15 years 12 months ago
Loved the humor