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xXsierraXx
xXsierraXx
Jun 06, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Suicide Note

Why is the world this way?
What did I do to deserve this?
I wish it would all go away
If it won't i will
I'll go to a place of no return
When I'm gone will they miss me?
Or would it just be a lifted burden
In the next life will it be opposite?
Willthere be someone there for me
This life is not worth living
So maybe I shouldn't live it at all
There's nothing here for me
And there's nobody
I want to end this horrid life
Iwant to commite suicide
And i know no one would even grieve
If I took my life away
I could do it with such ease
The only complex part of this
is which way would please
Sould I hang myself or slit my wrist
Or maybe even slit my throat
I need something special so I can leave my mark
Maybe something that will spark
I'll die in an eternal flame
To burn away the hurt and shame
I might do it friday the 13th
And maybe then I wont rest in peace
All the things that I have wrote
Is what I have made my suicide note
— xXsierraXx, Jun 06, 2010

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hobo

hobo

16 years 1 month ago

wow deep and dark

Wow my friend this is deep and dark I hope this is just a outside few of how you think it would feel to do this and not in your heart. everyone makes a ripple my friend and you have made one in my life. nice and scary read
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esperanza

16 years 1 month ago

that is great that you arent

that is great that you arent suicidal any more... for a long period in my life i was depressed, this poem is very very emotional god bless love esperanza
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esperanza

16 years 1 month ago

.6 stars

.6 stars
ifoundaplace

ifoundaplace

16 years 1 month ago

Awwh Sierra

I know exactly how you feel hon and I am sorry that you have gone through those thoughts. i know I have, more than once and we have talked about this before. And ya know, life really is worth living. No matter wht life you life. You only live once so you might as well get as much out of it as you can right? I think so. Life is a treasure to hold. A gift from God and we shall endure that. I love the poem, for it's meaning and quality, not for the experience. You know what I mean. Great job Sierra and keep your head up. this is very sad but I do know how it feels and i wish you all the best. I'm always here if ya need to chate with someone alright? Drop me a message and I'll help in any way I can. I look forward to see more of you my friend. good job Danielle. (:
xXsierraXx

xXsierraXx

16 years 1 month ago

thanks

thanks it really means a lot every tome i think about it i get teary eyed even right now i'm on the verge of tears but i promise i won't cry because it won't help and it won't change any thing .i gotta start thinkin positive Sierra
ifoundaplace

ifoundaplace

16 years 1 month ago

Sierra

It's okay to cry. It really really is. Crying helps release the pressure and it's healthy to cry. No shame in it . So if you must, you may cry. I know I cry a lot and that's a part of who I am now. I cry at the drop of a hat, but not just in front of anyone. usually just myself. I hope you feel better Sierra, your friend, Dani Live like there is no toomorrow, Love like you will never love again, Laugh like it will bwe your last. ~~ Live;Love;Laugh

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