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xXsierraXx
xXsierraXx
Jul 16, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Get Me

i just wanted you to get it

i just wanted you to get me

i wanted you to understand

but things didn't go 

according to plan

all you did was pretend

until you thought the problem

found its end

now i see

I've had my fill

you don't get me

and you never will
— xXsierraXx, Jul 16, 2010

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TimeIsNotAPromise

15 years 10 months ago

ahhhh!!!

i love it! absolutly love it! its my new favorite poem so beautiful great great job! :) Desu Haley
jetz

jetz

15 years 10 months ago

Hi Sierra, I dare say, we

Hi Sierra, I dare say, we have all felt this a time or two. Very nicely done. I'm not a fan of using the lower case "I" but, if you choose to do so, I think it should be consistent. Line 10..'I've'..just my opinion. I also think you could drop the 'you' in the last line and it wouldn't hurt a thing, perhaps even make it a tad stronger. Just suggestions. Sue