ShePra

Member since June 13, 2009

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Existence a curse

Posted Jul 6, 2011 · 25 lines · 7 critiques

I was born
as an angel
as a free soul
then who cuffed my wings
and raped my soul?

Every relation betrayed
every relation sold
a part of me
a part of my soul
was I so difficult to hold?

Soul of mine
tries its best
to ease my pain
but silly forgets

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the blazing heart

I ask me
I ask myself
is existence such a curse
or being such a pain
poor! With What words could it define?

A murmur said
fly to heavens
you don’t belong here
smiled I & said
do I belong there?.....

ShePra’s timeline

June 2024
12 Wed

Anniversary
15 years of membership
June 2019
12 Wed

Anniversary
10 years of membership
June 2014
12 Thu

Anniversary
5 years of membership
July 2011
07 Thu

Received a critique
on Come mother Come from @Leonard
"This is indeed a very touching piece - so typical of you - a very sensitive and caring person. Always a pleasure reading you. Leonard"
06 Wed

Received a critique
on Existence a curse from @weirdelf
"glad you could hear me. On the line and raped my soul [?] wasn't questioning the line, I was suggesting a question mark at the end of the question- then who cuffed my wings and raped my soul? Otherwise it is ambiguous…"
06 Wed

Received a critique
on Existence a curse from @weirdelf
"I would like to suggest that "&" instead of "and" detracts, as does "thee", especially grammatically incorrectly used, as you have. The capital letters on words doesn't quite work as a device. Also & raped my soul [?] I…"
06 Wed

Received a critique
on Existence a curse from @raj
"yes indeed...i liked its flow like a natural spring... be well ..."
06 Wed

Received a critique
on Existence a curse from @raj
"I feel touched reading this very emotive write..very expressive and effective...well done.... much love.."
06 Wed

Posted a poem
Existence a curse
"I was born"
Open thread 25 lines
05 Tue

Received a critique
on Come mother Come from @loved
"if u could try and avoid abbreviating and poetry as it is is short and sweet good yearnings happy treat"
04 Mon

Received a critique
on Come mother Come from @raj
"good to see you back and posting poems...your write does convey your craving to be a young one again and to be held in the comforting arms of your mother...i know this is a sensitive subject about mother and daughter re…"
04 Mon

Critiqued
"Euphoria" by @raj
"Dear Raj How beautifully can "the sound of silence" can define "Euphora"... i always enjoyed your work.. God Bless ShePra"
04 Mon

Posted a poem
Come mother Come
"Come mother come"
Open thread 25 lines
July 2010
17 Sat

Critiqued
"Hope in Hopelessness" by @Whiskurz
"If smile is precious, precious are tears that ooze from loving heart. If dew makes morning bright so do tears alight the night. It’s very sweet & delicate one, defining love with nude shade. Very well written take care"
15 Thu

Received a critique
on The house I live within from @faithmairee
"This is another great one. I love your writer's voice. It's so genuine! Great title, very good diction with a powerful delivery. Love-Faith ~I never say anything I don't mean nor do I say anything to be mean.~"
15 Thu

Critiqued
"i love you madly" by @faithmairee
"It has been long time since I read any sweet & simple love poem. It’s really cute just like a smile ... Take care"
13 Tue

Critiqued
"Lost Lore" by @xena465
"A girl that one always wishes to be... a girl that lives in every women soul ... & I guess that girl makes her a complete woman... An awesome work xena, I Love you for this work.. warm regards"
June 2010
26 Sat

Critiqued
"Illicit love" by @professor
"One more beautiful work of yours.... will be on spotlight for long time... I simply enjoyed it ... with regards ShePra"
25 Fri

Critiqued
"FLOWERS OF WISDOM" by @Nordic cloud
"I do agree with Ravensharti, Ann you really are an Earth Teacher. It’s a beautiful piece of work imitate your persona & depth. It was a glide for me & I enjoyed it.I am sorry as only 5 stars are available, but it deserv…"
18 Fri

Critiqued
"The Promise of Spring " by @raj
"Dear Friend... I love spring. Everything comes to life again but yes hail storms are not really far. So many time I have witness it & your poem was the perfect picture. I simply loved it Raj. It’s beautifully written or…"
18 Fri

Critiqued
"ZOUNDS" by @Nordic cloud
"It’s like a delight every verse so alive just like one more sunrise in the city of suns simply beautiful with love ShePra"
15 Tue

Posted a poem
The house I live within
"The house I live in is"
Open thread 19 lines
12 Sat

Anniversary
One year of membership
May 2010
29 Sat

Posted a poem
The dust of lust
"The dust of Lust"
Open thread 27 lines
10 Mon

Posted a poem
Girl Was I
"Girl was I"
Open thread 53 lines
March 2010
04 Thu

Posted a poem
Incomplete Flight
"Bird was I"
Open thread 19 lines
September 2009
17 Thu

Posted a poem
sometime I feel
"Sometime I feel"
Open thread 17 lines
July 2009
06 Mon

Posted a poem
the dream of night
"The dream of night"
Open thread 31 lines
June 2009
17 Wed

First critique offered
on "gravity" by @tanha
17 Wed

Posted a poem
Where love lives... where love remains
"Setting sun in the west"
Open thread 41 lines
13 Sat

First publication
I am falling
13 Sat

Most-discussed work
I am falling

16 critiques to date.
13 Sat

Posted a poem
I am falling
"I am slowly falling"
Open thread 24 lines
12 Fri

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.