sometime I feel

To carry oneself honestly, is tough to do..................you did to an extent,somehow something is missing keep going

Sometime I feel..........................(sometimeS) As if I have not talked to you Sometimes................................( could be OTHER TIMES but not necessarily) As if I have talked from ages........(for ages, or a lot...or?)( I have spoken a lot) Sometime I feel.........................(sometimeS)( could use senses instead so that feels comes later) As if you are a part of my self But the other part feels........( repetition of feels..better with something else...notices is too long..sees.. Your absence I am in conflict With my own self.............(Own self is a bit too much...with myself is enough) Where your presence,....... (a comma helps the meaning here) Where your absence, Both are felt… Oh I do hope I have helped its not an easy task, but keep trying and you will be able to paint your own little water colours of poetry for us to enjoy, as I do enjoy them. Love from Ann of Norway

Inner thoughts very well expressed in this write ...i believe poetry is a good medium to contemplate and in doing that many a times one finds the path...the missing link...when one is dealing with conflicts... warmly..raj (sublime_ocean)