ShePra

Member since June 13, 2009

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Existence a curse

Posted Jul 6, 2011 · 25 lines · 7 critiques

I was born
as an angel
as a free soul
then who cuffed my wings
and raped my soul?

Every relation betrayed
every relation sold
a part of me
a part of my soul
was I so difficult to hold?

Soul of mine
tries its best
to ease my pain
but silly forgets

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the blazing heart

I ask me
I ask myself
is existence such a curse
or being such a pain
poor! With What words could it define?

A murmur said
fly to heavens
you don’t belong here
smiled I & said
do I belong there?.....

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June 2024
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15 years of membership
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10 years of membership
June 2014
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5 years of membership
July 2011
07 Thu

Received a critique
on Come mother Come from @Leonard
"This is indeed a very touching piece - so typical of you - a very sensitive and caring person. Always a pleasure reading you. Leonard"
06 Wed

Received a critique
on Existence a curse from @weirdelf
"glad you could hear me. On the line and raped my soul [?] wasn't questioning the line, I was suggesting a question mark at the end of the question- then who cuffed my wings and raped my soul? Otherwise it is ambiguous…"
06 Wed

Received a critique
on Existence a curse from @weirdelf
"I would like to suggest that "&" instead of "and" detracts, as does "thee", especially grammatically incorrectly used, as you have. The capital letters on words doesn't quite work as a device. Also & raped my soul [?] I…"
06 Wed

Posted a poem
Existence a curse
"I was born"
Open thread 25 lines
04 Mon

Posted a poem
Come mother Come
"Come mother come"
Open thread 25 lines
June 2010
15 Tue

Posted a poem
The house I live within
"The house I live in is"
Open thread 19 lines
12 Sat

Anniversary
One year of membership
June 2009
17 Wed

First critique offered
on "gravity" by @tanha
13 Sat

First publication
I am falling
13 Sat

Most-discussed work
I am falling

16 critiques to date.
12 Fri

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.