tanha

Member since January 4, 2009

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Submerged

Posted Jun 9, 2010 · 11 lines · 1 critiques

Who are
You

It's
Your glance
Or a lake

In which
I'm being submerged

January 2024
03 Wed

Anniversary
15 years of membership
January 2019
03 Thu

Anniversary
10 years of membership
January 2014
03 Fri

Anniversary
5 years of membership
June 2010
26 Sat

Received a critique
on Submerged from @Candlewitch
"Nice to meet you. Your piece is short and to the point. Always, Cat"
26 Sat

Received a critique
on LAST WISH from @yenti
"This didn't flow to good but it can be fixed with a wider use of words, and some spaces for us old ones to breathe quite good otherwise, Yours Ian.T"
09 Wed

Posted a poem
Submerged
"Who are"
Open thread 11 lines
06 Sun

Received a critique
on Long distance from @Arrow
"Everything is big here Like size of this country Insecurity loneliness Fear *Maybe end the stanza here so the idea of fear doesn't get diminished by being sandwiched between the two lines below. Also, the two lines belo…"
05 Sat

Posted a poem
LAST WISH
"Last wish is just so"
Open thread 22 lines
03 Thu

Posted a poem
No More Plays Now
"You must have forgotten me"
Open thread 12 lines
January 2010
03 Sun

Anniversary
One year of membership
June 2009
17 Wed

First critique offered
on "I am falling" by @ShePra
May 2009
29 Fri

First publication
glimpse
January 2009
03 Sat

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 146 days later.