Long distance

Everything is big here Like size of this country Insecurity loneliness Fear *Maybe end the stanza here so the idea of fear doesn't get diminished by being sandwiched between the two lines below. Also, the two lines below seem to be a separate idea, deserving their own stanza. Still can not return To my country Returning To the same Fear of rejection Terrifies *This raises some interesting questions. What terrifies more than alienation in a vast, unknown land? Could you expand here? There also Relation only lasts With Long distances! *This poem has an interesting tension--relationships can only exist through distance and separation. I think this poem needs more fleshing out.