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tanha
Jun 05, 2010 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

LAST WISH

Last wish is just soThe news of my deathYou carry yourself to my friendWho is annoyed with me for yearsWhen you knock the doorAnd no responseDo not slip backStay for whileHe will replyIf he stand at the doorLike a statueTry to speak.If you can'tJust take my nameAnd hug himIf tears comeLet them flow,He will understand the rest.He knows,Such desireWho else can have 
— tanha, Jun 05, 2010

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yenti

yenti

16 years ago

Tanha

This didn't flow to good but it can be fixed with a wider use of words, and some spaces for us old ones to breathe quite good otherwise, Yours Ian.T

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