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ShePra
Mar 04, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Incomplete Flight

Bird was IFlew whole skyFrom eastFrom westConquering Gods nestMighty are the wingsEnvious ever sinceFeathers were soft to breeze& I harsh to windHow free was my flightMade every body delightBut nobody could seeChains on my desire Wings are to flyButFeet tieHow incomplete is my flight... 
— ShePra, Mar 04, 2010

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Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

Very good title

Ann of Norway Oh a lovely way of describing imagination's wings when we are chained to the earth and cannot fly. From east to west to east to west east and west Three possible alternatives? "Conquering Gods nest" Not quite sure what you mean by this? "Envious ever since" in a way you need ever since.....something to explain this since, since WHAT? "How free was my flight" So free, or cut out How? "Made every body delight" gave everyone delight, or...my spirits delight....that gave delight. Just some thoughts ShePra Love from Ann.