faithmairee

Member since June 21, 2010

Member for 15 years, 11 months

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orphan train

Posted Jan 9, 2020 · 13 lines · 5 critiques

who will help the children
aboard the orphan train
some of them may never
see their siblings again

who will help the children
to start their life anew
who will show compassion
for the unadopted few

who will help the children
once aboard the orphan train
to find the ones who loved them
and help alleviate their pain

Faith Elizabeth Brigham

faithmairee’s timeline

June 2025
20 Fri

Anniversary
15 years of membership
June 2020
20 Sat

Anniversary
10 years of membership
January 2020
10 Fri

Received a critique
on orphan train from @themoonman
"Good to see you. I rarely post and don't spend the time here we use to ... glad to see you. I thought you pretty much said the same thing in all your verses but then I thought, yes, for the majority of orphans, the lone…"
09 Thu

Received a critique
on orphan train from @scribbler
"This is a good question posed about All children who go unadopted. As to the ones separated at the border , I think we are doing all we can to be certain they are returned to their real parents. In some cases these actu…"
09 Thu

Received a critique
on orphan train from @Geezer
"if this is about the South American immigrants and the children that have been separated from their parents? I like the story, and the I wish that you had elaborated on the theme. I think that many who read this will wa…"
09 Thu

Posted a poem
orphan train
"who will help the children"
Open thread 13 lines
07 Tue

Posted a poem
rhyme me a nickel (rhyme me a dime)
"rhyme me a nickel"
Open thread 16 lines
April 2017
13 Thu

Posted a poem
the meeting
"we exchanged greetings"
Open thread 33 lines
June 2015
20 Sat

Anniversary
5 years of membership
June 2011
20 Mon

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One year of membership
July 2010
15 Thu

Highest posting month
July 2010 — 18 poems
11 Sun

Most-discussed work
yesterday's pain

26 critiques to date.
June 2010
21 Mon

First critique offered
on "Ishouldawouldacoulda" by @DawningDaytripper
21 Mon

First publication
a woman's face wears many masks
20 Sun

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.