RobeccaJane Lee-Murchison

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People Always Leave

Posted Dec 24, 2011 · 20 lines · 5 critiques

meeting and falling in love
fighting until push comes to shove
crying until you have had enough

feeling as though anything can be achived
things escalate until neither of you are pleased
trying to pick up the pieces as you grieve

seeing someone everyday for all that time
you whole life changes at the drop of a dime
someone you love has just finised their climb

the feeling that you will never be rejected
sometimes feeling and others not feeling accepted
you hit that point when you feel all together neglected

he wanted to be here, he wanted to stay
she couldnt take it anymore, had to get away

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whether we or they wanted it or not.......

God has taken them away
this is what i want to say
my opinion will never faulter or sway

because.........

PEOPLE ALWAYS LEAVE

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Received a critique
on People Always Leave from @Barbara Writes
"nice flow, i like how the title and theme came into perspective at the ending. the cliches are well used though i agree with whats already said by Beau. your poetic talent shines in this piece."
10 Mon

Received a critique
on People Always Leave from @Barbara Writes
"nice flow, i like how the title and theme came into perspective at the ending. the cliches are well used though i agree with whats already said by Beau. your poetic talent shines in this piece."
December 2011
24 Sat

Received a critique
on People Always Leave from @the_fool
"lots of typos in there, but that's easily fixed. the line- 'sometimes feeling and others not feeling accepted' confuses me. maybe a word was left out? good piece, tho. so nullus anxietas the_fool"
24 Sat

Posted a poem
People Always Leave
"meeting and falling in love"
Open thread 20 lines
May 2011
16 Mon

Anniversary
One year of membership
July 2010
15 Thu

Critiqued
"Mia Mona" by @hobo
"I LOVE IT!!!!!! the regard in which you hold our dear mona in is admirable. she is a special woman to all who know her, and she desirves for someone to have written a poem such as this for and about her. this is a very…"
13 Tue

Received a critique
on Vulnerable from @hobo
"very nice look into ones soul my friend, *You can never pick anyone up if you are busy putting them down*"
12 Mon

Received a critique
on Vulnerable from @night_writer71
"thats a good worded poem and pulls meaning from both light and dark of ones feelings. nice write..for me more of the showing feelings of dark. would bring more of a ballance."
11 Sun

Posted a poem
Vulnerable
"I don't cry"
Open thread 18 lines
05 Mon

Critiqued
"Just the beginning" by @thegodshatter2
"Tough subject matter, toucher critics on the matter. personal expeierences will tend to get in the way of how people comment, i do fear. i, however will not let mine get in the way. i will, however, say that this subjec…"
05 Mon

Critiqued
"caption in life" by @thegodshatter2
"Wow real deep, been there, done that, saved just in time, thank GOD!!!!! or my decieced best friend..... please, no more thoughts such as these, i could not bare it!!!! i hope you no longer think of things such as these…"
05 Mon

Critiqued
"Gump" by @ifoundaplace
"this was very heart-felt, and amazinly written, it spoke to me. i could just feel the raw emotions pouring off from you in every line. i dont know really what else to say except i feel you. my gradfather got sick and le…"
02 Fri

Received a critique
on Dirt-bag from @weirdelf
"when my ISP gets back to speed and I'll try to give more concrete suggestions, Cheers, Jess, Reprehensibly irrepressible,"
02 Fri

Received a critique
on Dirt-bag from @Alice Ember
"Yes!!! Finally, I can kick someones butt. I've had a serious withdrawl with my fights lately and I've been losing my ever loving mind!! I'm not quite sure if I should be offended by you talking 'bout my brooding face. V…"
June 2010
30 Wed

Received a critique
on Dirt-bag from @mark
"give it hell girl ! Mark people who hate attract people who hate and in the end they all end up hating each other"
29 Tue

Critiqued
"The monster's in me. The angel in you" by @thegodshatter2
"god second time reading this, and it is even better than the first time that i read it, it really messes with me, and in a good and bad way, all at the same time, so question me about how it messes with me when you see…"
22 Tue

Critiqued
"The monster's in me. The angel in you" by @thegodshatter2
"wow, hunn this is some very powerful stuff, it was an amazing read. there are just soooo many things that i want to tell you about it, about the whole theme and subject of it, but not in the buff, so private message me…"
15 Tue

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15 Tue

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Dirt-bag
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Open thread 74 lines
10 Thu

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"She Was" by @mona
"this reminds me of myself. ay dios miyo(oh my god), it is like you are writing of my childhood, of my life, it speaks to my heart as well as the stuff that i write does, and that is hard for people to do, i think that y…"
04 Fri

Critiqued
"Love or Lust" by @Sinthya
"is this about me? it is beautifully written. i love it it speaks to me."
01 Tue

Posted a poem
I Got A Feeling
"The sensation of your skin on my skin,"
Open thread 25 lines
May 2010
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Autumn Landscape
"Stained-glass artistry,"
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Song of my Richie Rich Hart
"You bring me to climax without a single touch,"
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Victor Pier JR.
"5/16/09"
Open thread 49 lines
23 Sun

First critique offered
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First poem published 6 days later.
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May 2010 — 5 poems

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I am who i am, i do what i do, i love who and what i love, and i want who or what i want, im TOOOOOO honest, almost to the point of being rude, and i love the person that i am. I have been writing poetry since i was 7 years old (13yrs). My whole family is full of artists, my mother writes childrens books, although i dont believe that she has sent any out to be published yet, my brothers are lyricists and musicians and vocalists, and my sisters are all some form or visual artists, whether it be tattoo artist or painter etc. My family is my world, for without them i wouldnt be the person that i am today. I have my faults just like everybody else, and i accept the fact that as much as i may not like them, i know that without my faults, i would not be RobeccaJane Lee-Murchison!! <3

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"Mia Mona" by @hobo

on Vulnerable from @hobo

on Vulnerable from @night_writer71

"Just the beginning" by @thegodshatter2

"caption in life" by @thegodshatter2

"Gump" by @ifoundaplace

on Dirt-bag from @weirdelf

on Dirt-bag from @Alice Ember

on Dirt-bag from @mark

"The monster's in me. The angel in you" by @thegodshatter2

"The monster's in me. The angel in you" by @thegodshatter2

"She Was" by @mona

"Love or Lust" by @Sinthya

on "Age Is JuSt" by @loved

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