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Jul 11, 2010
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Vulnerable
I don't cry
I don't sleep
I try to hide my feelings
I believe they show my weakness
You lie
You weep
You openly express yourself
You still have the courage to show your face
My weaknesses aren't that i am not tough
My weakness is that in expressing there is vulnerability
Being vulnerable is my weakness
My weakness is in my vulnerability
Your strenght is in expressing
And to me
For that
You are my hero
A person stronger than I
In an emotional sence.......
I don't sleep
I try to hide my feelings
I believe they show my weakness
You lie
You weep
You openly express yourself
You still have the courage to show your face
My weaknesses aren't that i am not tough
My weakness is that in expressing there is vulnerability
Being vulnerable is my weakness
My weakness is in my vulnerability
Your strenght is in expressing
And to me
For that
You are my hero
A person stronger than I
In an emotional sence.......
— RobeccaJane Lee-Murchison, Jul 11, 2010
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night_writer71
15 years 11 months ago
thats a good worded poem and
hobo
15 years 11 months ago
very nice look