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Vulnerable

I don't cry
I don't sleep

I try to hide my feelings
I believe they show my weakness

You lie
You weep

You openly express yourself
You still have the courage to show your face

My weaknesses aren't that i am not tough
My weakness is that in expressing there is vulnerability

Being vulnerable is my weakness
My weakness is in my vulnerability

Your strenght is in expressing
And to me

For that
You are my hero

A person stronger than I
In an emotional sence.......
— RobeccaJane Lee-Murchison, Jul 11, 2010

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night_writer71

15 years 11 months ago

thats a good worded poem and

thats a good worded poem and pulls meaning from both light and dark of ones feelings. nice write..for me more of the showing feelings of dark. would bring more of a ballance.
hobo

hobo

15 years 11 months ago

very nice look

very nice look into ones soul my friend, *You can never pick anyone up if you are busy putting them down*