May 27, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Autumn Landscape

Stained-glass artistry, Continual irony, Full of life while remaining a lifeless corpse, An eternity of melting time, Who goes to this place of everlasting peace and shattered passion, Who was this place of peeking nature and spying passion made for, This River of Life, This glass portrait of lifelessness, Stained-glass artistry, Continual irony.

— RobeccaJane Lee-Murchison, May 27, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: New York, USA

Critiques

Kailashana

16 years ago

And a wondrous

And a wondrous poem! Bow. ~A "Just as what you dream is your own and no one else can observe it, so the world you see is your own." ~ Nisargadatta

Ian The Poet

16 years ago

I really like it, well

I really like it, well done. All the best Ian.

wolf

16 years ago

A really beautiful poem,

A really beautiful poem, talent hides in every line.

Mark

16 years ago

so true of my young autumns

I simply enjoyed this write and the memories extracted and yes, irony.. Mark Resilient Flexibility RUN; when there seems to be no answer common sense will not speak, so run - -go running..

RobeccaJane Le…

15 years 11 months ago

Thank you !!!!

i would just like to say thank you to everyone on the comments that you left for me. i love how one thing for one person, can be translated to many things, to many people, and all it takes is the correct words. on feeling, or experience, or vision, can bring back memories to sooo, many, some that have nothing to do with what you meant for your poem to be about, but yet that is how they see it, that is how it is meant to be inturprited, from their point of views at least. so again thank you all for taking the time out to comment one my poem, and i appretiate the praise on the write. hope to hear from you all again soon!!! MUAH CHEEKY JSS "please someone help me, its not healthy for me to feel this, Y-O-U, are making this hard, you got me tossing and turnin, late in the night!!!!!;)" Rhianna. PS you know who you are, and trust me this is a good thing;)