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Jun 01, 2010
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I Got A Feeling
The sensation of your skin on my skin,
The scent of your body on my body,
The taste of your lips on my lips,
The sound of your breath mingling with my breath,
The view of us coming together thrust after pleasurable thrust,
The wondrous joy of lying side by side,
Night after night after night,
Heavy breathing and face numbing responsiveness,
Pouring sweat,
Unconscious phenomenon,
all around perplexity,
Complete and total apprehension acclimatize,
Exasperation and resentment accumulate,
this transpires incessantly,
I conjure you up on a regular occurrence,
I acknowledge that you are a replica,
that is neither here nor there,
The core requests what the heart desires,
There is no culmination for this ritual,
I recognize,
I deal with, and believe in this problem,
when you come around it will go away,
Until then i satisfyingly suffer loneliness,
Waiting for you,
Dreaming of you.
The scent of your body on my body,
The taste of your lips on my lips,
The sound of your breath mingling with my breath,
The view of us coming together thrust after pleasurable thrust,
The wondrous joy of lying side by side,
Night after night after night,
Heavy breathing and face numbing responsiveness,
Pouring sweat,
Unconscious phenomenon,
all around perplexity,
Complete and total apprehension acclimatize,
Exasperation and resentment accumulate,
this transpires incessantly,
I conjure you up on a regular occurrence,
I acknowledge that you are a replica,
that is neither here nor there,
The core requests what the heart desires,
There is no culmination for this ritual,
I recognize,
I deal with, and believe in this problem,
when you come around it will go away,
Until then i satisfyingly suffer loneliness,
Waiting for you,
Dreaming of you.
— RobeccaJane Lee-Murchison, Jun 01, 2010
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Mark
15 years 12 months ago
Dear Rebecca
RobeccaJane Le…
15 years 11 months ago
Appretiation