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judyanne

Member since February 12, 2010

Member, 2010 → 2017

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357 Poems

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Dactyl (meter workshop)

Posted May 9, 2017 · 4 lines · 3 critiques

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Travel through time with me now and remember the hopes and the fantasies
Think on the dreams we had then, in those days when the world was so young.
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judyanne’s timeline

May 2017
09 Tue

Posted a poem
Dactyl (meter workshop)
"."
Open thread 4 lines
06 Sat

Posted a poem
Regret
"the winter morning sun"
Open thread 21 lines
06 Sat

Critiqued
"Walkabout... Trochee / Wes' Meter Workshop" by @Geezer
"WALK a - | BOUT so | DO we | GO now STAY on | ROAD in | DARK of | NIGHT - time DOWN to | SLEEP for | LIGHT of | DAY sir WAKE to | WALK SOME | MILES MORE except for the last verse, where my ear hears spondee at those las…"
05 Fri

Critiqued
"Anapest" by @jane210660
"As for the second Ok.... emphasis on 'my' would need to be underlined or in italics I think But even then, I believe 'love' would be stressed as well (imo) And FAIR-est is definitely stressed/unstressed Try reading each…"
05 Fri

Critiqued
"Anapest" by @jane210660
"First one's fine to my ear... 'said' comes up soft when I read it 'PO -et - ry' I pronounce stressed, unstressed, unstressed But the second has some problems I parse it like this... In my HOUSE | sits a PICT - | ure on…"
05 Fri

Critiqued
"Walkabout... Trochee / Wes' Meter Workshop" by @Geezer
"At least not to my ear.... WALK a - | BOUT so | DO we | GO STAY on | the ROAD | all DARK | NIGHT lie DOWN | come BREAK | of DAWN | sir be - FORE | the HEAT | of DAY -| light Love judy xxx ."
05 Fri

Critiqued
"First Fling- meter workshop (anapest meter)" by @mark
"Nicely done Love judy xxx ."
04 Thu

Critiqued
"Suggest a title." by @Cristiano Williams
"So sorry ... it is for the shop after all.... the above edit I did is in free verse, not iambic.... Your poem is not iambic pentameter, I'm afraid Good try though... do persevere, it will come I have parsed it to show y…"
04 Thu

Posted a poem
Anapaest (meter workshop)
"Twas the day of the wedding, all dressed there at five,"
Open thread 7 lines
03 Wed

Critiqued
"The Reach" by @themoonman
"I have tears The very first line had me in You thanked her god, not yours... An atheist acknowledging another's god, immediately gives the write a sense of the devastation of loss I get the use of the word brutal Also l…"
03 Wed

Critiqued
"The Reach" by @themoonman
"Oops - double up xxx ."
01 Mon

Posted a poem
Death
"."
Open thread 17 lines
01 Mon

Posted a poem
Iambic and Trochee (meter, the workshop)
"."
Open thread 14 lines
April 2017
28 Fri

New follower
@Lamar Ingraham
November 2016
21 Mon

Posted a poem
Aftermath
"Waves break"
Open thread 15 lines
October 2016
08 Sat

Posted a poem
Off With His Head
"I hear, next year, in Russia, a man will lose his head."
Open thread 21 lines
August 2016
20 Sat

Posted a poem
Omran
"In cosy Western Camelot"
Open thread 17 lines
July 2016
11 Mon

New follower
@DiPrima
04 Mon

Posted a poem
disorder to order
"if"
Open thread 9 lines
01 Fri

Posted a poem
Paradise Lost
"I was"
Open thread 16 lines
June 2016
29 Wed

Posted a poem
Sonnet (untitled)
"Oh summer days of youth, those days of grace --"
Open thread 15 lines
10 Fri

Posted a poem
ephemeral
"once"
Open thread 11 lines
01 Wed

Contest commendation
May 2016 Contest - Triolet - $25 Amazon.com Gift Card Prize

with "and children cry (triolet - May contest)".
01 Wed

First contest commendation
May 2016 Contest - Triolet - $25 Amazon.com Gift Card Prize

with the poem "and children cry (triolet - May contest)".
May 2016
17 Tue

New follower
@jane210660
February 2015
20 Fri

Critique milestone
5,000 critiques given
11 Wed

Anniversary
5 years of membership
April 2012
23 Mon

Most-discussed work
honkas - prose to poetry workshop (final edit) - further addition especially for jess

65 critiques to date.
February 2011
11 Fri

Anniversary
One year of membership
June 2010
27 Sun

Posting milestone
100 poems posted
April 2010
18 Sun

Critique milestone
1,000 critiques given
March 2010
15 Mon

Highest posting month
March 2010 — 29 poems
February 2010
13 Sat

First critique offered
on "now that your gone" by @mardy3
12 Fri

First publication
sunrise
11 Thu

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.

About Me

About me

Location: Western Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets

Favourite poets? So many

so varied. I like particular songs

not necessarily the singer... and the same goes for poetry. I can honestly say though

that Alfred Noyes' The Highwayman was what inspired my love of poetry - my mother began reading it to me when I was still a baby

and it became my favourite bedtime story

Recent Work

The Three Absolutes

Posted: 11 May, 2010

Life

Posted: 10 May, 2010

Disclosure

Posted: 9 May, 2010

The Generation Gap

Posted: 8 May, 2010

The pussy cat

Posted: 5 May, 2010

Impasse

Posted: 4 May, 2010

Less Fortunate Soldiers

Posted: 24 April, 2010

Back There to Then

Posted: 23 April, 2010

Anzac Morn

Posted: 22 April, 2010

Earliest Memory

Posted: 21 April, 2010

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Contest Wins

This member has not yet won any contests.

Workshops

		Skill level:
Meter... The Workshop.	(syllabus)	Olympic Pool	Started 2017-04-29	Concluded
Super Quickie Critique	(syllabus)	Shark Pool	Started 2016-09-11	Concluded
Asking any questions.Using your computer for poetry, to ininityand beyond.	(syllabus)	Plunge Pool	Started 2015-11-10	Concluded
Storytelling in Verse (sempiternal): The Ballade	(syllabus)	Shark Pool	Started 2015-11-01	Concluded
Storytelling in Verse (sempiternal): The Horror Story	(syllabus)	Olympic Pool	Started 2015-07-01	Concluded
Meet The Masters	(syllabus)	Shark Pool	Started 2015-06-05	Concluded
An Exploration of Style, Subject, and Critique	(syllabus)	Shark Pool	Started 2015-05-08	Concluded
TITLES here we go	(syllabus)	Olympic Pool	Started 2015-04-24	Concluded
Critique and Criticism	(syllabus)	Shark Pool	Started 2015-04-05	Concluded
Meter Is Our Friend	(syllabus)	Wading Pool	Started 2015-03-03	Concluded
Effective Contemporary Pastoral poetry [Let's start]	(syllabus)	Olympic Pool	Started 2015-02-08	Concluded
"Sonnets"...Let's Know More	(syllabus)	Shark Pool	Started 2015-01-22	Concluded
Humor In Poetry	(syllabus)	Splash Pool	Started 2015-01-07	Concluded
Renga 12 ''Winds Of Life''	(syllabus)	Plunge Pool	Started 2014-11-26	Concluded
Eternal Renga Continues	(syllabus)	Wading Pool, Splash Pool, Olympic Pool, Shark Pool, Plunge Pool	Started 2012-11-07	Concluded
fixed verse – it's not a curse	(syllabus)	Olympic Pool, Plunge Pool	Started 2012-10-28	Concluded
Storytelling in Verse (sempiternal)	(syllabus)	Olympic Pool	Started 2012-09-29	Concluded
Mindful Memorable Freeform: The Challenge	(syllabus)	Shark Pool	Started 2012-08-31	Concluded
Eternal Renga	(syllabus)	Wading Pool, Splash Pool, Olympic Pool, Shark Pool, Plunge Pool	Started 2012-08-22	Concluded
Critique workshop - positive critiques	(syllabus)	Olympic Pool	Started 2012-08-25	Concluded
RHYME PATTERNS (part 1) let's begin	(syllabus)	Wading Pool	Started 2012-08-07	Concluded
Rhyme Crimes	(syllabus)	Olympic Pool	Started 2012-06-01	Concluded
FROM PROSE TO POETRY	(syllabus)	Splash Pool	Started 2012-04-21	Concluded
Working With Meter in Poetry	(syllabus)	Splash Pool	Started 2012-03-20	Concluded
Shark Pool (initial workshop)	(syllabus)	Shark Pool	Started 2011-05-16	Concluded

"Walkabout... Trochee / Wes' Meter Workshop" by @Geezer

"Anapest" by @jane210660

"Anapest" by @jane210660

"Walkabout... Trochee / Wes' Meter Workshop" by @Geezer

"First Fling- meter workshop (anapest meter)" by @mark

"Suggest a title." by @Cristiano Williams

"The Reach" by @themoonman

"The Reach" by @themoonman

5,000 critiques given

5 years of membership

One year of membership

100 poems posted

1,000 critiques given

March 2010 — 29 poems

on "now that your gone" by @mardy3

Membership begins

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