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The pussy cat

 

Her uncle was a sailor, with language sometimes base.

His favourite trick was to get real close and blow right in her face.

“Bloody windy,” he’d then say to her mother’s vexation.

“You’ll have her saying that word soon,” she’d say in exasperation.

 

Her mother knew it well and very often said,

“She seems to see things others don’t although just in her head.”

She had a little four legged friend. It was a cat so pretty.

She carried it just everywhere. No-one else could see it.  Pity.

 

Her uncle saw her sitting quiet and stroking something gently.

Something that he couldn’t see held in her arms so tenderly.

“What you got?” he asked with glee knowing full well what she’d say.

“My pussy cat.” she softly smiled. “I pat him every day.”

 

“Well I’ve a dog.” her uncle growled,”“and look at what he’s done.

He’s bit your pussy’s tail right off with teeth so sharp and long.

“Oh no, oh no!  The blood, the blood!” and tears flowed in a flood.

Inconsolable she was, “Look at all the blood!”

 

Tears flowed in rivers down her cheeks. He thought they’d never cease.

Her body shook by great big sobs. He was humbled by his niece.

She grieved uncontrollably. He felt so very bad.

Desperately he looked for help, didn’t want to make her sad.

 

Her mother caught her brother’s ear and clipped it with her hand.

“Here’s a first aid kit,” she said, passing nothing to the man.

“You’ll have to get some sutures and sew back on that tail.

And take your dog away from here if you don’t want to hear me rail.”

 

She watched as he pretended to sew the tail back on the cat.

The tears they’d dried upon her cheeks and he was feeling pretty flat.

Her mother hugged her baby girl and whispered in her ear

“Your uncle is an awful tease but we still love him dear.”

 

She sat there saying nothing with her friend wrapped in her arms.

The blood got mopped; puss’s end was stitched, and the situation calmed. 

When the mess was cleaned and the tail in place and quiet once more reigned,

he used his hankie to wipe her face, then put the sham kit away.

 

As he mimed the packing of the box she said “Uncle please don’t tease.”

Then warily she looked up at him, “And keep that dog away please.”

He couldn’t help the rumbling laugh escaping from his throat

her imagination was just too much. He really couldn’t cope.

 

His laughter was the final straw for the child who’d seen too much;

who’d watched her dear poor pussy cat mauled by that vicious mutt.

Her anger found its way right through her usual sweet regard.

“If that bloody dog bloody comes back here I’m gonna smack him bloody hard.”

 

 

 

— judyanne, May 05, 2010

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Region, Country: Western Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Favourite poets? So many, so varied. I like particular songs, not necessarily the singer... and the same goes for poetry. I can honestly say though, that Alfred Noyes' The Highwayman was what inspired my love of poetry - my mother began reading it to me when I was still a baby, and it became my favourite bedtime story

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judyanne

judyanne

16 years 1 month ago

hi licia

thanks, and thanks for visiting love judy xxxx
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Judd

You are a natural born storyteller ... another wonderful poem ... you reminded me of days long forgotten again ... its the aussie thing I think love and biggest hugs JayCee x x x P.S its so good to have you back ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 1 month ago

hi jc

thank you, such supportive cooments you always give me love and hugs back at you judd xxxxx ps - nice to be back, but my muses are still away i'm afraid.
SH

shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

very nicely done.

This is really brilliant,as i have worked with children for 20 years,i too have seen Monsters and animals and even once a lucy! i love the imagination of a child, and this poem really does it justice, really good read Thnk you. shirley harrison
mand

mand

16 years 1 month ago

wonderfully written

wonderfully written Judyanne, loved the ending, an excellent flow and a brilliant story, I really enjoyed it.
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 1 month ago

hi mand

long time my no visit you i will rectify that soon thanks for the comment. love judy xxx