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Less Fortunate Soldiers

 

At sunrise April, the twenty-fifth day,

round Australia the Last Post playing,

as you offer thanks I ask if I may

for less fortunate soldiers be praying.

Called deserter retreating from cross-fire

or wandering from the barrage all vague,

shell-shocked, confused. Punishment dire,

referred to rules made by General Haig.

Sentence military execution.

Dishonour, shame, family name sullied.

A century of false degradation,

the label of cowards we have carried.

 

Replace our tombstones, let families mourn.

Absolve the slur and remove ‘shot at dawn’.

 

To my knowledge no Australian soldier was executed for desertion in the Great War.
General Haig did approach the Australian government for authority (there were apparently a few ‘scallywags’ he wanted to make examples out of) but was refused it.
Maybe they had learned from The Breaker?

I don’t know about American soldiers,

But there were many Englishmen who were used as examples to put the fear of the consequences of running away into the troops. One soldier was shot for retreating 20 yards to a bunker when caught in crossfire in no man's land.
Many others were shell-shocked and did not even know what was happening.

These men (the majority, if not all, innocent of any wrong), despite petitions to the government, still have the words ‘shot at dawn’ on their records and many as far as I know still have the words on their gravesites.

— judyanne, Apr 24, 2010

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Region, Country: Western Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Favourite poets? So many, so varied. I like particular songs, not necessarily the singer... and the same goes for poetry. I can honestly say though, that Alfred Noyes' The Highwayman was what inspired my love of poetry - my mother began reading it to me when I was still a baby, and it became my favourite bedtime story

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loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

saluttations

i salute them as much as i do u u know ur too good we all know u knew
xena465

xena465

16 years 1 month ago

A tough one?

It's a lovely write, but I know nothing of war and what possesses a soldier to desert, but I can only imagine that fear of dying or killing in the face of it, in reality for some, is so much different to when training to be a soldier. I was in the TA for two years when I was 19 to 21 years of age. If I had been actually sent into a war zone...Mmm! I think I may have deserted...killing for real...being killed for real? I was just a teenager then, as an adult now, I would never have joined if I’d thought about it seriously. Rosina xena465
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 1 month ago

i think things are a lot different now

in the great war it was just young kids - conscripted, bsdly trained. boys out for adventure - not really understanding what war was about most of them wouldn't've joined if they'd've thought seriously love judy
Shango007

Shango007

16 years 1 month ago

I’ve studied the

I've studied the Australian experience in the Great War, and many men may be pardoned for feeling less than eager to face withering machinegun fire at a range of less than 50 yards... In my opinion, the playing field should be leveled by requiring saber-rattling politicians to accompany troops into battle (as tribal chiefs/great captains did frequently in ancient times).... because war is and always will be dirty business, but the modern media has a way of glorifying/sanitizing the action (think about Desert Storm). In the age of "video game" war, it's difficult for people to empathize with "cowards" and "deserters"....
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 1 month ago

nice to meet you

the kings always kept themselves away from the thick of the battle though (smile) thanks for your comment lol judy
SH

shirley harrison

16 years 1 month ago

great poem

Dear Judy, lovely words i like this! shirley harrison
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 1 month ago

hey bud !!!!

never much listened to Black Sabboth - my son liked them they wrote good lyrics - i always had trouble with the noise. thanks love judd