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Less Fortunate Soldiers
At sunrise April, the twenty-fifth day,
round Australia the Last Post playing,
as you offer thanks I ask if I may
for less fortunate soldiers be praying.
Called deserter retreating from cross-fire
or wandering from the barrage all vague,
shell-shocked, confused. Punishment dire,
referred to rules made by General Haig.
Sentence military execution.
Dishonour, shame, family name sullied.
A century of false degradation,
the label of cowards we have carried.
Replace our tombstones, let families mourn.
Absolve the slur and remove ‘shot at dawn’.
To my knowledge no Australian soldier was executed for desertion in the Great War.
General Haig did approach the Australian government for authority (there were apparently a few ‘scallywags’ he wanted to make examples out of) but was refused it.
Maybe they had learned from The Breaker?
I don’t know about American soldiers,
But there were many Englishmen who were used as examples to put the fear of the consequences of running away into the troops. One soldier was shot for retreating 20 yards to a bunker when caught in crossfire in no man's land.
Many others were shell-shocked and did not even know what was happening.
These men (the majority, if not all, innocent of any wrong), despite petitions to the government, still have the words ‘shot at dawn’ on their records and many as far as I know still have the words on their gravesites.
Critiques
loved
16 years 1 month ago
saluttations
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thanks loved
xena465
16 years 1 month ago
A tough one?
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
i think things are a lot different now
Shango007
16 years 1 month ago
I’ve studied the
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
nice to meet you
shirley harrison
16 years 1 month ago
great poem
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thanks shirley
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
hey bud !!!!