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May 09, 2010
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You entered my life
when I thought all was lost
and prompted renewal of trust.
I was resigned to forever reside in the dark
but you pulled the curtain
and revealed the sun still shines.
My muses burst with innovation
for a new joy I’d found in living.
The window had finally opened
since the door closed.
And you will never know
because of you I understand
death is not the same thing as
the end of birth.
— judyanne, May 09, 2010
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panaella
16 years 2 months ago
inspirational
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thank you ellie
Kailashana
16 years 2 months ago
Truly! Amazing
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
anna - i love your photo
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
hi licia
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
I love it Judy
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thank you rosina
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
hey bud !!!
raj
16 years 2 months ago
wow..
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thank you raj
mand
16 years 2 months ago
Done it again Judy!
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thanks mand
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
you always have supportive comments for me
shirley harrison
16 years 2 months ago
I'm with all the above
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thank you shirley
jetz
16 years 2 months ago
This is very beautiful Judy.
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
lovely thought and comment sue
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Judd
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
you are always so supportive jc
hobo
16 years 2 months ago
Beautiful
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
hi, nice to meet you
artygirl87
16 years 2 months ago
Liked it.
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
thanks L
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