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Apr 23, 2010
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Back There to Then
Vanished has your light from this field of play.
Although knowing our links will refasten
the heart of my world misses you each day
as the clock ticks toward our reunion.
If only I could manipulate time
and in the dreamtime go back there to then
to where, my son, your world merged with mine.
Your smile, voice, touch to enjoy once again.
Live over, anew those past days with you
to see one more time the growth into youth,
undertake all the things we did not do,
my greatest joy would be that, it is truth.
But to part again would still be our fate.
At the thought of that my hunger does sate.
— judyanne, Apr 23, 2010
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Nordic cloud
16 years 1 month ago
Oh sweet longing it tows the senses,
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
just general pondering on time annanya
pamela
16 years 1 month ago
Dear J., I wish I knew
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
thank you for that lovely compliment
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
you might notice
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
hey bud !!!!!
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
I AM NOT !!!!
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Judd
judyanne
16 years 1 month ago
dear jc
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
I havent yet will go am have