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Feb 13, 2010
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now that your gone
three crosses on the ground
all around me, no sound
queit earth, a sacred place
only memories of a face
i feel the sun shine on me,
a small summer breeze
flowers that have collected dust
pieces of iron incased in rust
solitude, what do i feel?
a need to remember you were real?
name on a marker made of glass
when all good things come to pass
why do i come here, pray tell
"it numbs a living Hell"
all around me, no sound
queit earth, a sacred place
only memories of a face
i feel the sun shine on me,
a small summer breeze
flowers that have collected dust
pieces of iron incased in rust
solitude, what do i feel?
a need to remember you were real?
name on a marker made of glass
when all good things come to pass
why do i come here, pray tell
"it numbs a living Hell"
— mardy3, Feb 13, 2010
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Critiques
Seren
16 years 3 months ago
I love that last line …
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
I too love that last line,
magics02
16 years 3 months ago
The graveside