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May 09, 2017
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Dactyl (meter workshop)
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Travel through time with me now and remember the hopes and the fantasies
Think on the dreams we had then, in those days when the world was so young.
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About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
wesley snow
8 years 11 months ago
I like your change Mark,
but I don't have a problem with Judy's version. Thank you for the Alexandrine.
judyanne
8 years 11 months ago
Thanks Wes
Glad you read this as dactyl
Love judy
xxx
weirdelf
8 years 9 months ago
My reading
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0XYWJcX45IY