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Posted May 3, 2017 · 4 lines · 7 critiques

Yesterday is gone, today is here
The future remains the offspring of today.
For as the day melts into night and night to day
Our hope for the celestial abode persevere.

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Received a critique
on Suggest a title. from @wesley snow
"this is essentially free verse. The ta - TUM of iambic rhythm is simply not there in most cases. My suggestion? Don't force it. Listen to it after you've penned it and read it naturally as though it were not poetry. The…"
04 Thu

Received a critique
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"So sorry ... it is for the shop after all.... the above edit I did is in free verse, not iambic.... Your poem is not iambic pentameter, I'm afraid Good try though... do persevere, it will come I have parsed it to show y…"
03 Wed

Received a critique
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"It's in the right place now. Jx"
03 Wed

Posted a poem
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"Yesterday is gone, today is here"
Open thread 4 lines
02 Tue

First critique offered
on "The Letter" by @Keith Logan
01 Mon

Posted a poem
THE BLUEPRINT TO A WONDERFUL EXISTENCE
"I know I shall sleep in death one day"
Open thread 12 lines
April 2017
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First publication
ODE TO THE MOON
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Posted a poem
ODE TO THE MOON
"Here I am,"
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