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The Three Absolutes
Smell the roses on the way is a saying often used
to encourage our awareness of the day;
to enhance appreciation for
the universe’s gifts
and with balming fragrant earth
nourish the soul.
The roses of life have the aroma of harmony,
amiable perfumed petals.
And the joys of living are captured within them
budding our exploration.
And the bloom is forever true to its work.
Unfailingly giving redolent bouquet.
Steadfastly soothing with aroma so sweet
that one can be lulled into forgetting
lurking just below
there are thorns
making times the rose
is not so sweet on the nose,
when some seasons the thorn pricks the finger.
But it is
blood given to inscribe the learning
offered with Love.
And to take courage and know we can’t alter the past
but we can do it better tomorrow
gives Hope.
For each chance we take,
a lesson is learned,
while both flower and thorn share the telling,
celebrating Reason.
Critiques
raskin
16 years ago
Great poem Judy. Well told,
judyanne
16 years ago
thanks raskin
mand
16 years ago
Always love your poems
judyanne
16 years ago
hey mand
xena465
16 years ago
There's always tomorrow
judyanne
16 years ago
that's true rosina
shirley harrison
16 years ago
Dear judy
judyanne
16 years ago
you are very kind shirley
Candlewitch
16 years ago
Dear Judy
judyanne
16 years ago
they're my favourite too cat