artygirl87

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Gossip

Posted Apr 8, 2011 · 24 lines · 1 critiques

The sun chases away the darkness,
The rain cleanses the earth,
The moonlight lights a path,
A journey from death to birth.

New eyes,
Untarnished soul,
Making one see the picture
is now finally whole.

You know who you are,
You speak from the heart,
Ignore those that try
to tear you apart.

The vulchers are jealous,
You they cannot see,

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All they see is gossip,
To spread forth they feel the need.

Hold your head high,
Do yourself proud,
Ignore those that voice opinions,
Those that get loud.

Listen to your inner voice,
The light among the dark,
Listen to yourself,
Before you let others take part.

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April 2011
08 Fri

Received a critique
on Scared and Alone from @ziggy
"hi there few suggestions for you to chew on "But it is, it's here, A part of your life, Not here to get you into strife." ,,,,,,,,I was thinking "but so it is here a part of your life not hear for strive, ,,,,,,, "You'r…"
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Received a critique
on Gossip from @Eduardo Cruz
"Gossip is always about the people who gossip it is never about you. It's about there own domestication, there dream not yours. So live your dream and let them live there dream the world has given them. You are free of t…"
08 Fri

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Gossip
"The sun chases away the darkness,"
Open thread 24 lines
08 Fri

Posted a poem
Scared and Alone
"You hold your head down,"
Open thread 32 lines
March 2011
27 Sun

Received a critique
on R.I.P from @magics02
"This poem was a hard one to digest but very thought out feelings placed to pen here. I feel your sadness and I am also holding someones hand that is so close to me and know that when he goes to sleep for the last time I…"
27 Sun

Received a critique
on R.I.P from @Roscoe Lane
"If this was my poem this is how i'd write it, hope this helps and i have'nt went to far.A heartfelt welcome to neopoet. Regards Roscoe.. Our sun lights darkness, and rain cleanses the Earth. As we also make a journey, w…"
27 Sun

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R.I.P
"The sun lights the darkness,"
Open thread 24 lines
06 Sun

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June 2010
20 Sun

Received a critique
on Through a Child's Eyes from @DloganB
"I wish I could be lost in my own imagination once again where everything was wondrous and magical beautiful poem"
06 Sun

Received a critique
on Ageing Gracefully from @judyanne
"love it judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html"
06 Sun

Received a critique
on Ageing Gracefully from @raj
"love respect and care for the aged is something all of us must possess...not just because we too shall be there sooner or later....but as is said we must "remmeber the spring when we drink from the stream"....a wonderfu…"
06 Sun

Received a critique
on Falling Angel from @judyanne
"'The wings they buckle, As the wind helps them break, She bites her lip in pain, But the blood doesn’t partake.' Try 'the wings buckle' - i think it sound better without the 'they' also 'partake' doesn't do it for me ma…"
06 Sun

Critiqued
"What God Told Me (In The Beginning)" by @judyanne
"Loved it. L."
01 Tue

Critiqued
"fall in line" by @DloganB
"So true"
01 Tue

Critiqued
"My Heart Grows" by @DloganB
"Flowed well, found my eyes jumped a bit when reading it on the angle but maybe that was deliberate. "A bond of love to confess this way" is my favourite line."
01 Tue

Critiqued
"Final Justice" by @Moloko D. Mahuma
"Sometimes fact is scarier than fiction. A poem that put shivers up my spine."
01 Tue

Critiqued
"The girls are glamorous" by @Ostra
"Didn't get the pizza bit...but rest was great. Its a shame they say superficial beautiful people are nasty...but you're spot on with us wanting to be like them or have one (in your case)."
01 Tue

Critiqued
"HOW Do WE ESCAPE Our JOURNEY" by @DloganB
"A journey never ends until the life force gives up, we can only change the direction of our path. Great poem."
01 Tue

Critiqued
"Vampyre XX" by @Vampyre
"Another beautiful poem about being alone."
01 Tue

Critiqued
"TO MY MOTHER (THE CONFESSION OF A STUBBORN GOAT)" by @adjei agyei-baah
"Beautiful poem. Beautiful words."
May 2010
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"Lying on my bed,"
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Meet My Ex
"Hold me close,                                                                               Attempt sleep and cry."
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Now I Understand
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on "The Circle" by @judyanne
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on Gossip from @Eduardo Cruz

on R.I.P from @magics02

on R.I.P from @Roscoe Lane

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on Through a Child's Eyes from @DloganB

on Ageing Gracefully from @judyanne

on Ageing Gracefully from @raj

on Falling Angel from @judyanne

"What God Told Me (In The Beginning)" by @judyanne

"fall in line" by @DloganB

"My Heart Grows" by @DloganB

"Final Justice" by @Moloko D. Mahuma

"The girls are glamorous" by @Ostra

"HOW Do WE ESCAPE Our JOURNEY" by @DloganB

"Vampyre XX" by @Vampyre

"TO MY MOTHER (THE CONFESSION OF A STUBBORN GOAT)" by @adjei agyei-baah

April 2010 — 5 poems

on "The Circle" by @judyanne

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