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The Circle

“Draw her a circle to stand in, she won’t stay still otherwise,”

were Mum’s unvarying words when my sister was immortalised.

So I have a snapshot of her with a circle drawn round her feet.

An elf in a fairy ring in the centre of a field of wheat.

The photo is in black and white. No colour film back then.

But as I view the familiar sight I see it all again.

The golden heads. The azure heavens. The crimson sets and rises

of a never ending circular sun filling the skyline with surprises.

 

And the whirl my sister stands in appears to symbolise

our journeys stretching out ahead in the never ending circle of life.

The ripened wheat behind her seems an emblem to our growth.

And the bright round sun on the edge of the world

gives a promise to us both that wonders are before us.

We’re, unsuspecting, unsuspicious - me behind the camera

and standing there, my little sister, with a circle twining round her feet

and a halo on the horizon – back in those days of hopeful youth

and innocent contemplation.

 

— judyanne, Mar 06, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Western Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Favourite poets? So many, so varied. I like particular songs, not necessarily the singer... and the same goes for poetry. I can honestly say though, that Alfred Noyes' The Highwayman was what inspired my love of poetry - my mother began reading it to me when I was still a baby, and it became my favourite bedtime story

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sunscreen

sunscreen

16 years 3 months ago

Very well, memories are an

Very well done, memories are an amazing thing to write about they seem to bring out the writers personality, showing us who you are. Very well done. I liked the circle to stand in, that made me laugh, and think of how when I was little, I too couldn't ever stand still, I was a energizer bunny, just kept going lol. Thank you for sharing your memory, and witch it a piece of your heart. :)
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

really troy, the painting

really troy, the painting and the letter were flashes in the pan. thanks for your comments, the key to my thoughts here - and answers your question about the halos and heavens - is in there for you to find. love judy
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

This is a lovely caught-in-the-mind experience

Ann of Norway No mention of crop-circles!!! Yes your feet are firmly on the ground, and yet! You sense the whole of a lifetime in the warmed wheat field, like the edge of a flat world and what lies beyond the edge nobody really knows. This is a lovely caught-in-the-mind experience and one we absolutely love sharing with you Judyanne, the balmy air filled with the scents of Summer and new cut wheat, just beautiful. We want to be there too, we want to feel that innocence without the harder experiences of life burdening our minds, ah that lovely innocence and freedom. Yes. My love to you as aye annanya. ( word correction read INANE!!!!!!!!!!!!)
xena465

xena465

16 years 3 months ago

Yes a lovely poem just like

Yes a lovely poem just like all your poems Judy. I see your poems are still in the SPOTLIGHT...good on you girl. Rosina xena465
artygirl87

artygirl87

16 years 3 months ago

Her innocence will forever

Her innocence will forever remain in the circle in the sand and the fond memory forever in your heart. Another well written poem Judyanne. I do however understand the elf to mean her to be mischievious at times (though I'm not sure if that's what you meant) and that makes me smile imagining a child with hair flaming as the sun lights it from behind, a frozen picture of innocence caught forever in time.
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

Hi L. good to see you here,

Hi L. good to see you here, thanks for visiting. I know that you will enjoy this site. looking forward to reading some of your work. Love judy
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 3 months ago

Rings in rings and things.

Ann of Norway My sister was a fidgety-fill too, and when visitors came she tore up and down he stairs a full speed for some reason or other, she's still full of energy doing all sorts giving her time to others in many ways, Scottish dance classes, playing golf, the violin, the nyckleharpa and looking after three grandchildren are among her tasks, and earlier a farmers wife, he is now retired, but all those dinners for occasional farmers dropping by, two hot meals a day was the rule, with all the trimmings and of course in Scotland soup/ broth every day. Och aye, every day. She was also very thin when she was little, we swopped gradually, not the I was fat ever, nor she, but thinner than her, we used to sing:- "We have an empty sausage skin, What on earth shall we put in, Bits of this and bits of that, That will make our Jeannie fat." You can almost hear the melody can't you? And if ever she looks here!!!!! SH!!!!
judyanne

judyanne

16 years 3 months ago

annanya

My sister would just walk up to whoever was taking the picture and try to look through the camera (the other way – as if trying to see the photographer’s eye.) Nothing but the circle would stop her. Artygirl wondered about the use of ‘elf.’ She was nicknamed many things elf, pixie.... biddy in the end was the one that stuck. Many reasons, elf being her initials and she was tiny and thin as an elf and although DROP DEAD GORGEOUS when she grew, had sticky out ears and a real pixie face. And in my memory that day she looked like a little elf gnome. And yes, she could be very mischievous. something just struck me, L- arty girl - elf is close to eef And that would be my bud Arty girl you want some fun Go visit Ephraim crud. love jydy