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The Circle
“Draw her a circle to stand in, she won’t stay still otherwise,”
were Mum’s unvarying words when my sister was immortalised.
So I have a snapshot of her with a circle drawn round her feet.
An elf in a fairy ring in the centre of a field of wheat.
The photo is in black and white. No colour film back then.
But as I view the familiar sight I see it all again.
The golden heads. The azure heavens. The crimson sets and rises
of a never ending circular sun filling the skyline with surprises.
And the whirl my sister stands in appears to symbolise
our journeys stretching out ahead in the never ending circle of life.
The ripened wheat behind her seems an emblem to our growth.
And the bright round sun on the edge of the world
gives a promise to us both that wonders are before us.
We’re, unsuspecting, unsuspicious - me behind the camera
and standing there, my little sister, with a circle twining round her feet
and a halo on the horizon – back in those days of hopeful youth
and innocent contemplation.
Critiques
sunscreen
16 years 3 months ago
Very well, memories are an
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you so much. I think
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
really troy, the painting
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
This is a lovely caught-in-the-mind experience
xena465
16 years 3 months ago
Yes a lovely poem just like
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Thank you both annanya and
artygirl87
16 years 3 months ago
Her innocence will forever
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
Hi L. good to see you here,
Nordic cloud
16 years 3 months ago
Rings in rings and things.
judyanne
16 years 3 months ago
annanya