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Jun 05, 2010
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What God Told Me (In The Beginning)
Within the mansion I manifest for you
abides everything that was, is and will be.
There you may determine your own adventures.
With free will
wander the maze of frozen light
and overlapping realities
in the hologram of human experience
of separation and forgetting
and possibilities.
As often as you want.
As long as you desire.
Pursue and gather knowledge.
Probe eternity.
Perpetually petition
in order that you may remember and,
white-waxed,
return to the unity of Being.
— judyanne, Jun 05, 2010
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Critiques
magics02
16 years ago
Raw and talented
judyanne
16 years ago
magic mona !!!
Seren
16 years ago
Dear Judd
judyanne
16 years ago
thank you so much jc
Bluesky Woman
16 years ago
white=waxed
judyanne
16 years ago
thanks leigh
hobo
16 years ago
this is so good
judyanne
16 years ago
that's such a compliment
panaella
16 years ago
beautiful
judyanne
16 years ago
you'r e too kind ellie
judyanne
16 years ago
hi annie, thank you
raj
16 years ago
Well done Judy...
judyanne
16 years ago
thanks for your interest raj
raj
16 years ago
Ahhhhhhhhhh…it more than
artygirl87
16 years ago
Loved it.L.
judyanne
16 years ago
thanks L
Rob Graber
16 years ago
Hey
judyanne
16 years ago
thanks rob
xena465
16 years ago
Hey Judy
judyanne
16 years ago
thank you very much rosina
Mark
16 years ago
hey Judy
judyanne
16 years ago
exactly mark
chumfin
16 years ago
oh! thank God i never missed
judyanne
16 years ago
hey chum !