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What God Told Me (In The Beginning)

 

Within the mansion I manifest for you

abides everything that was, is and will be.

There you may determine your own adventures.

 

With free will

wander the maze of frozen light

and overlapping realities

in the hologram of human experience

of separation and forgetting

and possibilities.

 

As often as you want.

As long as you desire.

 

Pursue and gather knowledge.

Probe eternity.

Perpetually petition

in order that you may remember and, 

white-waxed,

return to the unity of Being.

 

— judyanne, Jun 05, 2010

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Western Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Favourite poets? So many, so varied. I like particular songs, not necessarily the singer... and the same goes for poetry. I can honestly say though, that Alfred Noyes' The Highwayman was what inspired my love of poetry - my mother began reading it to me when I was still a baby, and it became my favourite bedtime story

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Critiques

M

magics02

16 years ago

Raw and talented

Judy Just wonderful you are..this one very good!! Hope all is well with you and your book is doing fine. Miss talking with ya Love, Mona xoxoxox
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

magic mona !!!

thank you sorry i've been so busy - will call by your way later this evening (X) don't know yet how the book's selling - probably won't really get any idea until a few months... love to you judy-jane xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
Seren

Seren

16 years ago

Dear Judd

lovely lovely poem Judd this is really beautiful you should be proud I know I am love and big hugs JayCee ("Quote:-For every beauty there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth there is an ear somewhere to hear it. For every love there is a heart somewhere to receive it.-Ivan Panin")
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

thank you so much jc

love and hugs across the nulla judd xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
BW

Bluesky Woman

16 years ago

white=waxed

this poem kinda sums it all up..... you're free, little human, go and live it all.... while you can..... nice write, thanks. Leigh "The true miracle is not walking on water or walking in air, but simply walking on this earth." Thich Nhat Hanh
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

thanks leigh

thanks for visiting love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
hobo

hobo

16 years ago

this is so good

Wow this is so good that when I tried to figure out what lines I liked best I realized I like every line. great read my friend
P

panaella

16 years ago

beautiful

Elegant, crafted beautiful write...as usual. Luv Ells x
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

you'r e too kind ellie

but i'll accept every complimment nice to see you back love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

hi annie, thank you

thanks for visiting - sorry i haven't been your way to comment lately - i have been reading your work - you've been choosing some contraversial subjects lately - enjoying it and good on you love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
R

raj

16 years ago

Well done Judy...

a very nice write...i would say philosophical as well as thought provoking... could you please throw more light on the following lines? in order that you may remember and, white-waxed, return to the unity of Being.... will look forward to your thoughts on the above lines...
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

thanks for your interest raj

the key to my thoughts is in the lines 'As often as you want as long as you desire' for while we want and desire we 'belong' in this particulat existence and we need to gain knowledge and polish our souls before we can return to our source. hope that clears it for you? love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
R

raj

16 years ago

Ahhhhhhhhhh…it more than

Ahhhhhhhhhh...it more than clears my mind and in fact enlightens me with the beauty in those philosophical thoughts so refined... thank you for making me wiser Judy... love raj (sublime_ocean)
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

thanks L

calling your way soon love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

thanks rob

never there long (x) love judy http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
xena465

xena465

16 years ago

Hey Judy

Simply the best of your writes so far. Love this stanza... With free will wander the maze of frozen light and overlapping realities in the hologram of human experience of separation and forgetting and possibilities. Xena
Mark

Mark

16 years ago

hey Judy

Just want to say I very much enjoyed ! Why else a mind and a body to boot? Mark Resilient Flexibility RUN; when there seems to be no answer common sense will not speak, so run - -go running..
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

exactly mark

thanks for visiting so glad you liked it love judy http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
chumfin

chumfin

16 years ago

oh! thank God i never missed

oh! thank God i never missed this great piece of poetry , its really a piece of great craft from you. i enjoyed it. you are good. chumfin
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

hey chum !

so good to see you on my page. thanks for calling by sorry i haven't been to see you for a while i will rectify that soon so glad you enjoyed this love judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html