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Ageing Gracefully

As the sun rises and sets,And the moon dances across the sky,An ageing lady smiles,Never asking why.
 You see she hasSeen it all before,In its endless cycleFor one and all.
 She has seen wars,Lost those by her side,She has also seen new life,Both have made her cry.
 The times should have hardened her,Yet her heart is made of gold,Her love stretches to all,Young and old.
 Even if she couldn’t afford,She would buy everyone a treat,No hidden unwanted gifts,Everyone says neat.
 You see this lady,She knows us all,She has seen you grow,From short to tall.
 She has seen you go,From crawl to stand,After all these years she knows what you like,Even if she can’t comprehend.
 Modern technology,A skill she states she does not own,Yet she can still turn on a t.vAnd use a portable phone.
 She has aged gracefully,And got on with the times,Never would she get caught speeding,Or get a nasty fine.
 Instead she slows,Watching the scenery go by,Remembering the good old days,Making out images from clouds in the sky.
 In those days ladies wore dresses,Stockings covered the thighs,Now it’s jeans or skirts,Slashed or short and well past knee high.
 She doesn’t judge,She just grins,In the good old days,That was almost a sin.
 Her teeth may not be her own,But soon neither will yours,With all the sweets she bought you,Some from off shore.
 So smile at this lady,Show some respect,Help her with the odd thing,Even if she hasn’t asked you yet.
Soon enough it’ll be your turn,
As each day you age... 
— artygirl87, Apr 28, 2010

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raj

16 years 1 month ago

Meaningful

Hi Artygirl, loved the message in your poem..."ageing is a sure thing with everyone...so do the best one can and love with the times" warmly...raj..
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hippiepoet69

16 years 1 month ago

Thumbs up

That touched my heart. I thought I would die young and leave a good looking corpse. But I'm too late. I don't use stars. Take Care. huey
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Skybones777

16 years 1 month ago

WOW

Bravo. very Good. this Poem hit's close to Pearl,s heart. I work as Adult Home Care... I take care of a 89 year young Lady. "The times should have hardened her, Yet her heart is made of gold, Her love stretches to all, Young and old" to her Age is just a number. I add one thing ...too your Poem. "Help her with the odd thing, She does not Worry about what tomorrow will bring. Even if she hasn’t asked you yet. Soon enough it’ll be your turn, As each day you age.Never ForGet, you Are Never to old to Learn. PeAce LaTer8^)
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magics02

16 years 1 month ago

Hey Arty gal!!

Thumbs up gal this one really hit home. As I was reading it I thought to the end it would say this poem to my Mom..it sure made me think of it that way. Every line made me think of Mom..Great one here girl!! Missed seeing you and will visit more often. Grazzi Mona xoxo TIME well spent is TIME well lived
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lyz

16 years 1 month ago

A+ Dear girl. A little Respect, yes.

I am trying to grow old gracefully but its hard, and do I have to, lol. You have written a brilliant poem here and it rolled well off the tongue, made a hell of a read and so true. We are all young at heart and only as young as we feel. Love Lyz. XX
artygirl87

artygirl87

16 years 1 month ago

Thank you so much everyone.

Thank you so much everyone. I actually wrote it for a lady very dear to me that turns 79 tomorrow. She cried when she read it and I put it in a frame for her birthday present.
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lyz

16 years 1 month ago

Dear one

Birthday wishes to your dear friend and a what a grand friend you are. Love Lyz. XX
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xraycat

16 years 1 month ago

I can see why she cried,

I can see why she cried, this is really good, you show so much thought and respect in your words, beautiful! cat xx
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raj

16 years ago

love respect and care for

love respect and care for the aged is something all of us must possess...not just because we too shall be there sooner or later....but as is said we must "remmeber the spring when we drink from the stream"....a wonderfull message you have here artygirl..it is nice to read your write again... raj (sublime_ocean)...
judyanne

judyanne

16 years ago

soooo good L

love it judy xxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html