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Tink
Member since April 7, 2008
Member for 18 years, 1 month
No Matter
Shallow breaths of those who sleep bare no witness
of the soul it keeps.
Secrets kept of those who weep make no difference
to those that leap.
Silencing those who dare to peep have no bearing
on those who creep.
Tink 5/23/2026
Tink’s timeline
- June 2026
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02 TueReceived a critique
on No Matter from @patrickgadoury
"This is a powerful piece. My only hickup as a reader, and this could be just me, is that restatting the title in the first line isn't needed at all." -
02 TueCritiqued
"The dogs of war" by @flj011278
"Hi I'm Tink. What a raw, honest poem about a horrible happening. Your words created pictures just as raw and honest. I personally think that needs to happen for the gravity of it to be seen and realized. kudos to the po…" -
02 TueCritiqued
"Untitled Vampire Poem #2" by @jankspace
"Hi, I'm Tink. I'm a sucker for Vampire stuff. So, of course, I had to give this a read. I noticed it is #2, so maybe I need to read #1 first. I personally had trouble following this. It jumped from thought to thought an…" - May 2026
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31 SunCritiqued
"Pandora's Box" by @aeschlin
"I get that! I wonder if there is a better way to get that point across, so that that memory comes across clearer, maybe a line like "...at your face. trying to see through the veil exposing the real you..." maybe. It ma…" -
31 SunCritiqued
"Pandora's Box" by @aeschlin
"I get that! I wonder if there is a better way to get that point across, so that that memory comes across clearer, maybe a line like "...at your face. trying to see through the veil exposing the real you..." maybe. It ma…" -
31 SunCritiqued
"Ahavati" by @Wallyroo92
"Wally, I enjoyed this very much! Kinda that point I was trying get across in chat tonight. She is your mentor because she was honest. She lead you to a place leaving you to take what you could use and leave what you cou…" -
30 SatCritiqued
"Pandora's Box" by @aeschlin
"Hello, I'm Tink. I enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing. The one place where I had pause was the use of the line "wondering at your face". In my mind wondering about your face would have made more sense. "at" throws…" -
30 SatCritiqued
"The Empty Chair" by @robster555
"Hi, I'm Tink. I read this, intrigued with the premise and hoped To tap into where my mind and own memories wanted to go. It started to, then i found the flow being disrupted, thoughts stopping abruptly. I agree with wha…" -
30 SatCritiqued
"A symphony for broken things" by @jemikalajah
"Hi, I am Tink. I really enjoyed the message I got from this poem. Having learned the Violin growing up many, many years ago, I understand having "artistic" differences with a teacher and being called "broken" for the wa…" -
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23 SatNew follower
@Trouble
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23 SatNew follower
@Candlewitch
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23 SatReceived a critique
on Coming Home from @Candlewitch
"This is a wonderful piece, I read it aloud and could feel the emotions tentatively reaching out... and it stole my breath away! Thank you for posting this. wishing you peace, Cat" -
22 FriNew follower
@BlueSkies
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22 FriReceived a critique
on Coming Home from @Geezer
"those lies, because of the insecurity of the people who feel they must always show their superiority, by putting somebody else down. They shout the loudest, finagle and steal your happy place little by little... Anyway…" -
21 ThuReceived a critique
on Coming Home from @BlueSkies
"What an honest, moving poem. I love that I know the back story to this one. It makes it all the more meaningful... Truly a work of art. Well done! Thank you for sharing! -Blue" -
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- April 2023
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06 ThuAnniversary
15 years of membership
- April 2018
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06 FriAnniversary
10 years of membership
- April 2013
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06 SatAnniversary
5 years of membership
- July 2010
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16 Fri
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16 Fri
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16 FriReceived a critique
on Teardrop from @Roscoe Lane
"never quite thought about a teardrop that much. Great poem. Regards Roscoe. PS I did something similar with neopoet, in my short stories and called it anthem." -
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- May 2010
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- January 2010
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20 WedPosted a poem
Tortured Soul (Formerly Untitled (open for suggestions))
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- July 2009
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13 Mon
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- April 2009
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06 MonAnniversary
One year of membership
- March 2009
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20 Fri
- December 2008
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15 MonHighest posting month
December 2008 — 8 poems
- April 2008
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08 TueFirst critique offered
on "Blue Eyes" by @muttering_madwoman
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07 MonFirst publication
Life's Essentials (since unpublished)
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06 SunJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
Just an old battleax crone wanna-be trying to find peace in the chaos.
Always flipping the hats, juggling life experiences, trying to make my way back to where my muse hides, taunting my return. Always searching for the words that escape me. Longing to be where my heart is truly content. Creating. Sharing. One letter at a time.
It's good to be back.
Location: Pennsylvania, USA
Recent Work
Teardrop
Stay the Course
Blind
Words in Chains
Long Time
Snarl of the Tongue
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