R.

Member since July 8, 2026

Member for 12 days

Ghost

Posted Jul 21, 2026 · 6 lines · 1 critiques

I watch you walk away, my hands useless at my sides.

I scream your name until my throat tears open.

You never turn.

You thin into a blurred shade.

The horizon erases you.

I can't tell which of us goes first.

R.’s timeline

July 2026
21 Tue

Posted a poem
Ghost
"I watch you walk away, my hands useless at my sides."
Open thread 6 lines
20 Mon

Posted a poem
Soon
"Baby, you are my heart"
Open thread 14 lines
19 Sun

Received a critique
on Desert's souls from @Tink
"It's much more powerful now, don't ya think? Yours in Ink, Tink"
19 Sun

Received a critique
on Mountain's Journey from @Michael Anthony
"Love the mountain analogy and the imagery - enjoyed this well-written piece!"
19 Sun

Posted a poem
Mountain's Journey
"The fog is stifling."
Open thread 13 lines
18 Sat

Received a critique
on Desert's souls from @Tink
"What if your stated something like this for your last line... "I, too, roam Within that desert"... Hoping to find myself again. As I am that Desert. Just a thought. Take what you can use, and leave the rest. Live, Love…"
13 Mon

New follower
@Tink
13 Mon

Received a critique
on Desert's souls from @Tink
"Welcome to Neopoet. I enjoyed this piece. It is unique in describing how someone feeling alone views the world. The only thing I can offer as far as critique, and this could just be my own "thing", the last thought does…"
09 Thu

First publication
Desert's souls
09 Thu

Posted a poem
Desert's souls
"My soul feels like the Earth"
Open thread 11 lines
08 Wed

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.