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naelurecy
Member since July 18, 2026
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The Song of a Monarch
I miss him, with all my soul, with all my heart, with all my whole
He was like a sight of millions of monarch butterflies soaring across the sky
The kind that makes you want to cry
The beautiful orange rays that flew, warm and true
That would never make you feel blue
His voice, rich and sweet like delicate honeysuckles
Flourished in the air, atom to atom, pair to pair
The warmth he brings, gentle like spring
The moments we shared, tied by a red string, warm and comforting
I miss him, with all my love, with all the care we used to share
Even in the heavy dark, when I am left with despair
To feel him, see him, and love him, is what I craved
Until there came a day, I thought we couldn’t be saved
To give a second chance, was it right or wrong?
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When everything about him reminded me of a love song
Lingering in the sky, like those monarch butterflies
Should it have been kept a thought? Just a fleeting memory?
But the notes of song, the notes of our love
Decided to sing a sweet melody, rising above
And it revived what was lost, into something anew
No longer leaving us cold-hearted and blue
But only bringing back the warmth that we always knew
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