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A.S.M
Member since June 9, 2026
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My Favorite Memory
I remember riding a white horse.
His name was Mr. Snowball,
he'd take me anywhere I wanted to go.
The wind whispered in my ears,
moving my curls out of my face.
I looked around,
an endless green field and a perfect blue sky.
My mom was smiling at me near the fence
with a small, black camera in her hands,
keeping the moment forever.
I was seven years old when it happened.
Looking back, it made no sense—
a kid riding a horse by herself.
It was my favorite memory.
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Yesterday I mentioned it to my mom,
giving details about the device she used
to photograph us.
She said she does not remember
me riding my beloved animal.
For some reason
she never showed me the picture.
She told me that the camera is somewhere in the basement.
I searched it for exactly 134 minutes.
I found it under Reggie the dinosaur,
next to a package of Oreos from 2014.
Today I entered the camera roll,
versions of me flooded the small screen.
I saw my favorite places to visit
when my legs were still short.
The beach, the carousel and
a room I didn't quite recall.
Unfortunately,
no Mr. Snowball there.
When I asked my mother about the horse,
she told me I must've skipped the picture.
She took it from my hands and claimed she had found it.
She turned the camera towards me.
I looked at the evidence.
The blue sky and the field
looked like cheap wallpaper.
Mr. Snowball was actually made of plastic.
A.S.M’s timeline
- August 2026
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14 FriNew follower
@lykkeligere
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10 MonCritiqued
"Secret Meetings" by @paul
"What a great piece of poetry Paul! One of my favorites on Neo for sure." -
04 TueCritiqued
"Don’t forget me" by @Armannveer Singh
"The poem has three metaphors for 10 lines and they are not connected. The lotus, the ocean of life (well worn metaphor) and cow/calf. I'd cut the second, leave only the lotus flower and the cow." -
04 TueCritiqued
"Gold" by @Shay Roberts
"I have no idea how the title relate to the subject, I couldn't link it so maybe make that conection more explicit, it reads as obscure right now. You don't give us any context for the heart to be bleading, it also says…" -
04 TueCritiqued
"Given to the dogs" by @flj011278
"This poems feels like spiraling thoughts, "tear stained pillow" followed by "blood shot eyes" are the best lines for me. I think "The end" weakens the poem, and your ponctuation use is inconsistent throughout the poem…" - July 2026
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08 WedNew follower
@Human Cultist
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07 TueCritiqued
"Prophecy Of Blood" by @Human Cultist
"I think the idea it's great but it sounds obscure, there are terms without grounding, the poem relies on complex wording which fits the prophecy context but it makes confusing instead of mysterious. Also the time passag…" -
04 SatNew follower
@Trouble
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04 SatReceived a critique
on My Favorite Memory from @Tink
"Only you would know the importance of the 134 minutes, as it is written. May I?? "She told me that the camera is downstairs somewhere in the basement. I searched it for 134 minutes. I found it under Reggie the dinosaur…" -
04 SatReceived a critique
on My Favorite Memory from @Tink
"Alice, I really can relate to this piece. My own memories passed through my mind that weren't the way I remembered them to be. There are a few places where the punctuation either needs to be or shouldn't be. if you read…" -
04 SatNew follower
@Tink
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02 ThuReceived a critique
on My Favorite Memory from @BlueSkies
"I feel like this really touches on the imagination in a kid's mind and how, as you grow older, you begin to see the reality of things. And thus, lose your creativity. Maybe even feeling disappointed when you look back a…" -
02 ThuCritiqued
"Lazy Rainy Morning" by @William Lynn
"This image: "The sky wears its grey sweater, loose and comfortable," Is stunning! For me it carries the whole stanza. Honestly the title is a bit explanatory and adds nothing to the read. Also like how this part: "Life…" -
02 ThuCritiqued
"To Live and To Love" by @BlueSkies
"I loved the tenderness you managed to put out on the paper, it has simple langague (it matches the nostalgia of being a kid again), specific (yet universal) objects of childhood and that's exactly why it works so well…" -
02 Thu
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01 WedCritiqued
"A letter too my future self " by @Trouble
""Constantly dreaming about the letter, too my future self I wrote." This part you forced the rhyme, it reads weird and it attracts attention to itself rather than the content. "I’m thirteen now I often Think about that…" - June 2026
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22 MonReceived a critique
on My Heat Stroke from @Tink
"This was an interesting read, though I did have to read it twice to catch the jist. I'm not sure what i thought the first time through. I think if you go back through it and cut out some of the fluff, it might read bett…" -
13 Sat
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11 ThuReceived a critique
on My Heat Stroke from @Geezer
"that the emotional impact made this sizzle, without being too forward, I liked it ,~ Geezer. ." -
10 WedFirst publication
My Heat Stroke
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10 Wed
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09 TueFirst critique offered
on "Flashdance" by @WylEWriter
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09 TueJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
I was born in 2007, in Brazil.
I've been writing poetry for 6 years.
Location: BRA
Favorite Poets
Louise Glück and Emily Lawson.
Louis Glück and Emily Lawson.
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