streshenkofftheresa

Member since June 12, 2026

Member for 6 days

I’m Sorry I Broke Your Heart

Posted Jun 17, 2026 · 16 lines · 2 critiques

I never meant to break your heart
Or take your spark away
I never meant to hurt your soul
I’m sorry I couldn’t stay

Even when you weren’t with me
You were always in my heart
Thank you for never giving up on me
And giving us a new start

There are no words that can describe
Just how sorry I truly am
For everything you had to see
And everywhere you had to be

But this I promise to you, my love
From this moment on
That I am always here for you
With everything that you do

streshenkofftheresa’s timeline

June 2026
18 Thu

Received a critique
on To My Bipolar from @Tink
"I can relate to this one! I am by no means an editor however, the first "to" in the second line of the first stanza needs an extra "o". Caught my eye immediately. The fifth stanza is, to me, off in its pace. Maybe its t…"
18 Thu

Received a critique
on I’m Sorry I Broke Your Heart from @Tink
"i connected with this right away. although I did stumble when the rhyming pattern switched. Knowing how important the message is in the last two stanzas, I tried to figure a way to keep the rhyming rhythm without losing…"
18 Thu

New follower
@Tink
17 Wed

Posted a poem
I’m Sorry I Broke Your Heart
"I never meant to break your heart"
Open thread 16 lines
16 Tue

Posted a poem
If Not For You
"If not for you I would not know"
Open thread 16 lines
16 Tue

Posted a poem
What Is It About You
"What is it about you that makes me feel weak"
Open thread 12 lines
16 Tue

New follower
@hbserge
16 Tue

Posted a poem
My Silence
"As I lay "
Open thread 17 lines
15 Mon

Highest posting month
June 2026 — 7 poems
14 Sun

Posted a poem
To My Bipolar
"The burden of you"
Open thread 24 lines
13 Sat

Posted a poem
Life In Vain
"As death looms the angels cry"
Open thread 16 lines
13 Sat

Received a critique
on A Dream By The Bipolar Mind from @Geezer
"I think it has gotten it pretty much right. ~ Geezer. Welcome to Neo."
12 Fri

First publication
A Dream By The Bipolar Mind
12 Fri

Posted a poem
A Dream By The Bipolar Mind
"Night after night, I have this dream"
Open thread 17 lines
12 Fri

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.