Shayne

Member since July 22, 2026

Member for 25 days

Premium new member

4 Poems

14 Comments

4 Followers

Most recent

Bonded

Posted Aug 2, 2026 · 13 lines · 1 critiques

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Forever bonded fond of joy and everlasting love

Alone fleeting,fluttering like a dove.

Flying so high below the droves

Abandoned and serial memories collecting dust

Rust and rain rotting everlasting trust

Shayne’s timeline

August 2026
02 Sun

Posted a poem
Bonded
" "
Open thread 13 lines
July 2026
24 Fri

Posted a poem
Puzzle of love
"Simple truths unfold in the battle of the mind,"
Open thread 7 lines
24 Fri

Received a critique
on perched throne from @upliftingpoet84
"I really liked how you did this piece it reminded me of the conversations that I have with my cat lol keep writing"
24 Fri

Received a critique
on perched throne from @upliftingpoet84
"I really liked how you did this piece it reminded me of the conversations that I have with my cat lol keep writing"
23 Thu

Critiqued
"Mentalities " by @Trouble
"i love your rhyme schemes there's a quaint elegance to your words and can feel inspired to write one about humanity's bleak dismal portrait"
23 Thu

Critiqued
"I am called by different names " by @Trouble
"i like the flow and religious theme of the poem it made me feel relaxed the final line hit hard for me making me question what the hell were doing to gods creation"
23 Thu

Received a critique
on perched throne from @Trouble
"hey shayne my name is pressley or trouble nice to meet you isn't it wonderful how we can imagine the conversations between animals that always inspires me good job"
23 Thu

New follower
@Trouble
23 Thu

Posted a poem
perched throne
" "
Open thread 27 lines
23 Thu

Critiqued
"Your in (yearn) nation never felt so Gr-r-reat, yet pissed off at the same time" by @Jane A. Rug
"it had me coming back a third time lol"
23 Thu

Critiqued
"Your in (yearn) nation never felt so Gr-r-reat, yet pissed off at the same time" by @Jane A. Rug
"i war reading what i thought was grotesque and absurd but had me captivated good luck with the exploding bowls...then the murder it was absurd yet i couldn't stop reading it to be honest i think its original that's for…"
23 Thu

New follower
@upliftingpoet84
22 Wed

Critiqued
"Teardrop" by @Tink
"i love your creativity"
22 Wed

Critiqued
"Picasso's" by @Kermit Mullins
"Picasso is a brilliant title"
22 Wed

Critiqued
"Trust Issues" by @upliftingpoet84
"loved the strong language stay strong keep posting your truths"
22 Wed

Critiqued
"Tears For a Cousin" by @W. Barrett Munn
"you must have really loved your cousin sounds like you were trying to do your best to be with her in the end"
22 Wed

New follower
@brain7days
22 Wed

Received a critique
on Empathetic from @streshenkofftheresa
"This is an amazing write I love how well it flows and it's relatable"
22 Wed

Received a critique
on Empathetic from @Tink
"Welcome to Neopoet! Thank you for posting your first poem with us. Both AI and Geezer have beaten to all that I would have said myself! Good job! I look forward to reading more of your work. Please reach out if you have…"
22 Wed

New follower
@Tink
22 Wed

First critique offered
on "Blame it on bad luck " by @LoveCharlie666
22 Wed

Received a critique
on Empathetic from @Geezer
"You know... It seems like I can't slack for a moment or that sneaky Neo. A.I. will get the ones that I connect with before I can get here. Not to say, that the A.I. is wrong about this, but I enjoyed the rhyme scheme, a…"
22 Wed

First publication
Empathetic
22 Wed

Posted a poem
Empathetic
"Tattered chains wrapping around a hopeful soul,"
Open thread 13 lines
22 Wed

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.