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Tink
Jul 16, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Teardrop

Tender moisture
Escaping down
Alone.

Reasons vary
Depending upon
Residual
Opinions
Portrayed in your eyes.
— Tink, Jul 16, 2010

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Region, Country: Pennsylvania, USA

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Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

15 years 10 months ago

Very clever,

never quite thought about a teardrop that much. Great poem. Regards Roscoe. PS I did something similar with neopoet, in my short stories and called it anthem.
whitetea

whitetea

15 years 10 months ago

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Interesting that the eyes cry, the organs that are used for vision.
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Lonnie

15 years 10 months ago

My freind, you made me cry!

Tink, Tink, Tink!!! It's good to see that you are back in form, and if this poem is any indication, your form is improving even more! Love, Lonnie!