sutton

Member since February 28, 2010

Member for 16 years, 3 months

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summit

Posted Oct 11, 2012 · 8 lines · 2 critiques

Sommit a poem
one every one luv
but I cant spell every word
the ones you see above
but I write them any way
hoping some one will reed
this bs that comes out
to all you i feed

sutton’s timeline

February 2025
27 Thu

Anniversary
15 years of membership
February 2020
27 Thu

Anniversary
10 years of membership
February 2015
27 Fri

Anniversary
5 years of membership
October 2012
12 Fri

Received a critique
on summit from @Ian.T
"Firstly welcome to Neopoet. If there is at any time a need for help then just ask. There are a few very good poets in Ontario and they will help you as all the others around the world. No need to be sorry we all start o…"
11 Thu

Posted a poem
summit
"Sommit a poem"
Open thread 8 lines
February 2011
27 Sun

Anniversary
One year of membership
June 2010
11 Fri

Received a critique
on WAITING from @Professor Purple
"My pleasure dude. I wish I'd be able to forget smoking if I wrote a piece on waiting, but I don'T think I could. Antoine"
May 2010
16 Sun

Received a critique
on WAITING from @Professor Purple
"Good one! I guess yo're not a smoker eh? Otherwise you would probably mentioned that in the 2nd stanza! Antoine"
15 Sat

Posted a poem
WAITING
" Sitting"
Open thread 17 lines
05 Wed

Received a critique
on I'M RIGHT!! from @DawningDaytripper
"That was Great!! I will even say awesome, I love songs, want to learn to write them. Would love to hear the rest if you find it. Maybe even on spoken word, (you could sing it) that would be cool. I hate to tell you I to…"
04 Tue

Received a critique
on I'M RIGHT!! from @Professor Purple
"Yeah it sure feels like a song. Most but not all of my poetry is meant to be a song, but hopefully good enough to be written or spoken without instruments. And I know all about forgetting stuff, I rationalize it by sayi…"
04 Tue

Received a critique
on I'M RIGHT!! from @Professor Purple
"Hi! This poem is great! I was just surfing around for a writer's group, and you convinced me to join this site. I really like how it seems you're talking to someone eye to eye, from the heart, and still manage to put yo…"
04 Tue

Critiqued
"mistek3z r mAiD" by @zombie
"I think it kind of helps that I just smoked one, but i like it thought it was pretty interesting to read, What ever you think it's about then Thats what it about, i enjoyed the challenge"
04 Tue

Critiqued
"Open Your Eyes " by @zombie
"Every time I read it it takes me to a different place/memmory....Its crazy and I like it"
04 Tue

Posted a poem
I'M RIGHT!!
" I hate to tell you, I told you so, but I love to say I'm right"
Open thread 20 lines
April 2010
30 Fri

Received a critique
on I'd be Mo from @magics02
"Mona TIME well spent is TIME well lived"
30 Fri

Received a critique
on Arrested from @magics02
"Mona TIME well spent is TIME well lived"
15 Thu

Highest posting month
April 2010 — 6 poems
11 Sun

Posted a poem
My Horse and Carage
"smoking pipes"
Open thread 28 lines
09 Fri

Posted a poem
Arrested
" I'm a loser see me now"
Open thread 23 lines
07 Wed

Posted a poem
I'd be Mo
" Dreading the words of the past  Though they were so long ago"
Open thread 25 lines
07 Wed

Critiqued
"lolita" by @Lunegirl
"you really did cause quit the stir, any how take it from me from your average non reading person of the world, it's great, seems to me if these people read your poem enough times they could blame you for the murder of J…"
07 Wed

Critiqued
"lolita" by @Lunegirl
"just write, it think this was amazing, nothing always has to have an excepted ending, indecision in writes is what makes them great, this is not the news. great write,"
06 Tue

Posted a poem
Battle
"  "
Open thread 28 lines
05 Mon

Critiqued
"effigy" by @partacidcharm
"cool"
05 Mon

Critiqued
"Come Out Of The Hiding " by @magics02
"makes me want to get up in the morning a go for a jog"
05 Mon

Critiqued
"Dont cover my words with yours" by @ANC1996
"fight for your right"
05 Mon

Posted a poem
Showing Her Skin
"she's so slutty"
Open thread 24 lines
02 Fri

Posted a poem
birthday blues
" the times that i've had the times that are done"
Open thread 24 lines
March 2010
30 Tue

Posted a poem
thunk
" i'm drunk, i thunk  while i put my beer in the trunk"
Open thread 9 lines
23 Tue

Posted a poem
.........
"heat your house, it's too cold out side"
Open thread 15 lines
09 Tue

Posted a poem
rhymes with floor
"I wake up in the morning"
Open thread 19 lines
01 Mon

Critiqued
"Blind Date" by @buggles
"I had the same experience once, only the mane i called her was one she expected i was thinking of, if it wasn't for her expectations it probley wouldn't have happened......damn expectation.lol......very good i liked it"
February 2010
28 Sun

First critique offered
on "Okay, baby, take it away" by @Mariposa
28 Sun

First publication
dye
27 Sat

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.