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Open Your Eyes

 When you gaze into my eyes, what do you see?
A never ending world ? A precious memory?Or do you just see within your heart alone?Its mainly a forced prospective,
In my eyes, have shown,
 So many different wonders, so many sparkles...
light,
A never ending twighlight upon my midnight,
just gaze into my world and understand,
That I am the darkest secret through time, in sand!
              ^^ZOMBIE^^
— zombie, May 04, 2010

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sutton

16 years 1 month ago

Trippy

Every time I read it it takes me to a different place/memmory....Its crazy and I like it
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zombie

16 years ago

thanks

I can be scary when I want to be but I think my words are more scary than I am!
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years ago

Oh my dear Zombie! I meant

Oh my dear Zombie! I meant haunting in a good way! Something powerful. lives an after effect on your mind and soul. That is what I meant. Your Friend Always, Elizabeth
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zombie

16 years ago

sweet!

k thanks