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May 04, 2010
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Open Your Eyes
When you gaze into my eyes, what do you see?
A never ending world ? A precious memory?Or do you just see within your heart alone?Its mainly a forced prospective,
In my eyes, have shown,
So many different wonders, so many sparkles...
light,
A never ending twighlight upon my midnight,
just gaze into my world and understand,
That I am the darkest secret through time, in sand!
^^ZOMBIE^^
A never ending world ? A precious memory?Or do you just see within your heart alone?Its mainly a forced prospective,
In my eyes, have shown,
So many different wonders, so many sparkles...
light,
A never ending twighlight upon my midnight,
just gaze into my world and understand,
That I am the darkest secret through time, in sand!
^^ZOMBIE^^
— zombie, May 04, 2010
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Critiques
sutton
16 years 1 month ago
Trippy
greeneyes
16 years 1 month ago
Great poem Zombie! It left
zombie
16 years ago
thanks
greeneyes
16 years ago
Oh my dear Zombie! I meant
zombie
16 years ago
sweet!