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sutton
Mar 09, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

rhymes with floor


I wake up in the morning
I'm sleeping on the floor
I almost made it in side
But my legs are out the door
The bottle I was drinking
Has a shot, so I take one more
So I don't drive myself insane
Thinking about that little hore

In the after noon
After a nap on my back stair
 23 empty cans around me
And something crawling in my hair
The sun has come and found me
And burned all the shin that was bare
but as long as I have one more beer 
Baby I still don't care



May be one day I write something from when I was happy so you all keep reading this depressing Sh*t
And learn how not to swear.LoL
 


— sutton, Mar 09, 2010

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Country/Region: Ontario

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seabhac

seabhac

16 years 3 months ago

Ha loved the title Sutton

We all write how we see out world around us that makes a multi cultural site like this so interesting. I get the impression from your poems posted that life has been a bit shit for you lately. Writing is cathartic and so good to confess the worst of our 'sins' sometimes we disguise them our own as others in our poems...you, I feel are too honest for that self deceit and the gutsy feel of your writes make you endearing as a fellow human. When you're on the floor don't forget to look at the sky,I'll fly by and wish you well. Seabhac ( gaelic for hawk )