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sutton
May 15, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

WAITING

 Sitting
    waiting
        longing
          yawning
Hoping
    coping
       moping
          smoking
thinking 
    linking 
         winking
             sinking
tic tock, tic tock, tic tock, tic tock
tic tock, tic tock, tic tock, tic tock,
tic tock, Tic Tock, Toc Tock, Tic Tock,
TIC TOCK TIC TOCK TIC TOCK!!!!!
FOR FUCK SAKES, WHERE ARE YOU!!!!!!!!
— sutton, May 15, 2010

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Country/Region: Ontario

Favorite Poets: every poet is my favorite poet

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sutton

16 years ago

ya

I am a smoker.. shit thats perfect. i was upset and that slipped by, but thatnks cause I WASN'T CRAZY ABOUT THe soaking part, you just made my day, thanks!!!!!!!!