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Apr 05, 2010
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Come Out Of The Hiding
Come out of the hiding
All you've been fighting
Darkened eyes, graying place
Time to take a look at its face
What are you hiding from
Nothing's left in that box
From a withering soul
Many a story to be told
Come out of the hiding
Banishing tears of cryings
Blanketed veils covered you
Vanish the feelings sad and blue
Be gone the smoldering fires
Ember lights glow a new tomorrow
From all that was hidden
Let it be gone and forgiven
Come out of the hiding
All you've been fighting
Beckon the light, the soul awakes
Today's a new day, make the break.
4.05.10 mms.
— magics02, Apr 05, 2010
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magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Reflects
partacidcharm
16 years 2 months ago
i like this. i like the
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Meaning(s)
sutton
16 years 2 months ago
i like
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
How are you Sutton
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Mona
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Thanks JC
xena465
16 years 2 months ago
I love this Mona sounds just
Nordic cloud
16 years 2 months ago
Knit picking again I am dear Mona.
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
It is okay
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you my lovely
Thabo Maluleka
16 years 2 months ago
Great writing style!!!
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Why thank you so much
Thabo Maluleka
16 years 2 months ago
That would be good. I would
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
I most certainly will
chumfin
16 years 2 months ago
i wont hide hide
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you Chum friend
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Yes your assumption is correct
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you Indi friend
loved
16 years 2 months ago
Anonymity
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you Loved
Candlewitch
16 years 2 months ago
Dear Mona
magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you Golden
Silent_Rain
16 years 2 months ago
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magics02
16 years 2 months ago
Thank you Rain
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16 years 2 months ago
yes...