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Mar 23, 2010
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heat your house, it's too cold out side
warm your heart, before it dies
snuggle my arm, as if your hurt
cry on my shoulder, it seems to work
hold my hand, your always welcome
hug my neck, tomorrow will come
smile a little, so i know it's you
laugh at it all, it's all we can do
request a song, and i will sing
demand a dream, i'll try any thing
look at the world, tell me what you see
grab what you want, I hope it's me
believe my story, cause it's all true
i love everyone, specially you
warm your heart, before it dies
snuggle my arm, as if your hurt
cry on my shoulder, it seems to work
hold my hand, your always welcome
hug my neck, tomorrow will come
smile a little, so i know it's you
laugh at it all, it's all we can do
request a song, and i will sing
demand a dream, i'll try any thing
look at the world, tell me what you see
grab what you want, I hope it's me
believe my story, cause it's all true
i love everyone, specially you
— sutton, Mar 23, 2010
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sutton
16 years 2 months ago
me being lazy
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
yep, lazy. You can write a poem you can write a title.