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sutton
Apr 09, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Arrested

 I'm a loser

see me now

a drug user

 

drunken boozer

don't have a cow

I'm a loser

 

self amuser

have fun some how

a drug user

 

body abuser

 falling down

I'm a loser

 

self accuser

even drunk now

a drug user

 

pulled over by a cruiser

to the judge, I bow

I'm a loser

a drug user


— sutton, Apr 09, 2010

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Country/Region: Ontario

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Seren

Seren

16 years 2 months ago

Dear Sutton

Sounds like a rough day/night ... fourth stanza body abuser the falling dow ? or the falling down ? just checking anywho lol take care kind regards love JayCee
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 2 months ago

Hello

in addition to Jayne's comments, Looser should be spelled Loser. I hope I have helped. Nice to meet you. Always, Cat
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sutton

16 years 2 months ago

so

what does looser mean then??? jk, thanks i made the change
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anonymous1

16 years 2 months ago

I really like your poem. I

I really like your poem. I like the repetition of "I'm a loser" and "a drug user." The end rhyming is not forced. Lisa