kinganeye

Member since July 6, 2007

Member for 18 years, 11 months

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The Tree

Posted Jun 7, 2012 · 18 lines · 2 critiques

The tree play's a lonely solitary stance.
Upon the wind it sways and dance's.
Stretching its arm as far it can reach.
Shedding its bounty of pears so sweet.
It is just a tree.
Unlike us it is free.
Proud and strong in a changing moods.
Bearing fruit tender and good.
Still its leaves are shimmering green.
When autumn comes a change can be seen.
Leaves changing color to a golden brown.
And falling softly to a velvety ground.
In the wind you catch the rustling sound.
In a habitat that constantly evolves.
In a world that forever revolves.
And the children from the branches sing.
From a rope tied tight they gently swing.
Laughter heard escaping softly on a wind

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July 2022
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Anniversary
15 years of membership
July 2017
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Anniversary
10 years of membership
July 2012
05 Thu

Anniversary
5 years of membership
June 2012
07 Thu

Received a critique
on The Tree from @weirdelf
"Come on on! do you you think you are Wordsworth?"
07 Thu

Received a critique
on The Tree from @Rula
"Reflects your love for the tree and how much it means to you Just a couple of grammer corrections in the first two lines . You don't need the 's in 'Plays' and 'Dances' as it is part of the verb not a contraction The tr…"
07 Thu

Posted a poem
The Tree
"The tree play's a lonely solitary stance."
Open thread 18 lines
March 2010
08 Mon

Received a critique
on Guardian Angel from @mark
"I think they can be very much alike. I really think it to include anybody or thing that has helped us alnong our way. This is one of my favorite poems Kinganeye. Thanks, mark"
February 2010
14 Sun

Posted a poem
When Destiny Comes
" "
Open thread 32 lines
March 2009
06 Fri

Received a critique
on The Stone from @Nordic cloud
"I liked this coolness and the subject, I felt as if I were wandering in a graveyard and stopped beside your grave to study it, it was the light that caught my eye. I am perhaps biased as I have a big collection of photo…"
July 2008
05 Sat

Anniversary
One year of membership
October 2007
18 Thu

Received a critique
on Rainbow from @mark
"Thanks"
18 Thu

Received a critique
on Guardian Angel from @mark
"Thanks kinganeye, I like this. I think asking for decisions to be made without mistake is asking alot but that's what angels do right. Thanks, Mark"
15 Mon

Posted a poem
Rainbow
"Red, The color of the blood he shed"
Open thread 37 lines
15 Mon

Posted a poem
Guardian Angel
" "
Open thread 33 lines
15 Mon

Posted a poem
Guardian Angel
" "
Open thread 33 lines
14 Sun

Received a critique
on New Year from @IKnowNoBox
"The year does bring renewal and I hope the Next one does the same . well said. In ink, Dabbler"
September 2007
26 Wed

Posted a poem
Who is that Baby
"Who is that baby that grows"
Open thread 20 lines
26 Wed

Posted a poem
Till I waltz with you again.
"Ne’er be afraid of the tears."
Open thread 18 lines
26 Wed

Posted a poem
New Year
"Raise your glass, Happy New Year."
Open thread 20 lines
05 Wed

Received a critique
on Dream Screams from @Prototype
"Good poem, you have a very nice way to show your dedication. Most people only write about the share of "sweet dreams". People tend to ignore the existence of "nightmares". Keep up!"
July 2007
28 Sat

Posted a poem
My explanation of you in my life.
"I was there at the birth to see your new little life."
Open thread 34 lines
20 Fri

Posted a poem
Freddy Flappy Ears
"In a little village just outside the big town lived a little boy called Freddie Flappy ears. Freddie was very lonely because he had no friends. He would stay at home and play in the garden on his own because no one would want to call round for him. Things were not much better when he went to school. All the boys and girls at school would laugh at Freddy’s rather strange but large ears and this made Freddie aware and very sad. One day Freddie went home from school crying his little eyes out. What’s wrong my darling said Freddy’s mother. All the children are laughing at me because of my ears.  Don’t worry my darling, you are my little darling, and you are just a perfect little boy so just ignore them. They are all very silly children and you should feel sorry for them for being silly and not accepting you. The one thing Freddie they all look the same and you are special and some day they will find that out. "
Open thread 10 lines
20 Fri

Posted a poem
Freddy Flappy Ears
" "
Open thread 13 lines
19 Thu

Critiqued
"What is..." by @Alijandra
"You have a lot in there I would have written several pieces and expanded them there are a lot of good ideas. I am a crap speller I use a wp spell checker its more important to get the idea down and then you can tinker w…"
19 Thu

Critiqued
"This Hate...." by @Alijandra
"It is end when you feel it is and you and knowing when to stop. Great Work John"
19 Thu

Critiqued
"Forbidden Lovers" by @Alijandra
"I like it its raw, Its strong with physical intent. Its realistic about the need to hold back, but the reckless sense that drives you forward. And a need to belong that might not be there. The security in familairty. Jo…"
18 Wed

Posted a poem
I am a Slave to those kids
"Hey guys shut that door"
Open thread 15 lines
15 Sun

Critiqued
"America the brave" by @weirdelf
"I am from Scotland and live in the US my pet hate is when you are over here everybody is something rather than being american. However in Europe they are all American I am afraid the logic escapes me? Americans are not…"
15 Sun

Critiqued
"THE BURNING (Impact Verse)" by @Spirit Song
"You could have written more and take it so many different directions it reminds me jus a little of poem I have up here called Armgeddon Keep it flowing and keep it growing John"
15 Sun

Highest posting month
July 2007 — 69 poems
14 Sat

Critiqued
"WAR BETWEEN GOD AND HIM" by @SAKTHEEE2007
"I may has missed something here or there is something missing that I cant quite place. It needs to flow better I am not sure but it seems harsh in its usage of english"
14 Sat

Critiqued
"A Difficult Woman to Reach" by @Conect11
"Keep it up"
14 Sat

Critiqued
"You calling me a wanker?" by @weirdelf
"Good old brit expression LOL wanka"
14 Sat

First critique offered
on "Homesick" by @weirdelf
06 Fri

First publication
Your Imagination
05 Thu

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.

15 years of membership

10 years of membership

5 years of membership

on The Tree from @weirdelf

on The Tree from @Rula

on Guardian Angel from @mark

on The Stone from @Nordic cloud

One year of membership

on Rainbow from @mark

on Guardian Angel from @mark

on New Year from @IKnowNoBox

on Dream Screams from @Prototype

"What is..." by @Alijandra

"This Hate...." by @Alijandra

"Forbidden Lovers" by @Alijandra

"America the brave" by @weirdelf

"THE BURNING (Impact Verse)" by @Spirit Song

July 2007 — 69 poems

"WAR BETWEEN GOD AND HIM" by @SAKTHEEE2007

"A Difficult Woman to Reach" by @Conect11

"You calling me a wanker?" by @weirdelf

on "Homesick" by @weirdelf

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