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Feb 14, 2010
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When Destiny Comes
When destiny comes.It has your nameI hear the sound of distant drumsI feel the fire and the flame. When destiny comesGuitar concertos gently strumAngels sing in a heavenly choirTwo hearts joined by silken wire. When destiny comesWe shall succumb.Heart to heart as one.Soul to soul, gently spun And so we shall take a walkInto our garden of jade.To sit and tenderly talkWhere love is truly made. Gentle fragrance on the wind abounds.Your hand cradled in mine.Nothing to confoundMind, heart and body entwined. When destiny comesGrasp it tenderly with both hands.The racing heart is again calm.Only in each other do we understand.When destiny comes
— kinganeye, Feb 14, 2010
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