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Jul 10, 2007
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WAR BETWEEN GOD AND HIM
HERE DEVIL’S ATROCITIES AND THE NECESSITY OF PURE SOULS
ARE NARRATED AS A POEM
WAR BETWEEN GOD AND HIM
WAR BETWEEN GOD AND HIM
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HE IS POWERFUL TO DO ANYTHING
HIS HANDS ARE MIGHTY TO DO HARM TO ALL
HE NEVER FEARS TO THE GOD
HIS RULE IS GOING ON HERE
TO CHANGE THIS CRUEL
NOBLE SOULS HAVE TO COME
THEY MAY BE FROM SLUM OR RICH
THEIR THOUGHTS SHOULD BE UNIQUE
HIS POWERS MAY BE HUGE AND ENORMOUS
HIS LIFE MAY BE STRONG AND LONG
THESE PURE SOULS CAN PUT AN END TO IT
THEIR SACRIFICE ALONE CNA DO THIS
HIS WAR AGAINST THE GOD IS ATROCIOUS
IT CANNOT BE TOLLERATE FOR A LONG
WE MAY PRAY TO UNITE THEM TO COME
THEIR ARRIVAL IS THE ONLY WAY TO OUR PEACE
SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN AN INDIAN ENGLISH POET
— SAKTHEEE2007, Jul 10, 2007
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weirdelf
19 years ago
sakkthee, I don't quite know what to make of your work
SAKTHEEE2007
19 years ago
THANK YOU
A. M. Painter
19 years ago
everythings good and all..., but
kinganeye
19 years ago
I may has missed something
SAKTHEEE2007
19 years ago
sorry
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