Frost Smith

Member since August 19, 2007

Member for 18 years, 9 months

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Foggy

Posted Feb 6, 2012 · 13 lines · 1 critiques

Treading in the mucus of the lungs of despair
A child blindly splashing around
Franticly trying to generate enough noise for any passersby to notice
Alas, no one does
Plummeting to the bottom
Succumbing to this tormented inadequacy
Using the toxic lung butter of fear
To spread on the moldy bread of self deception
It feeds my insanity that no better life exist
I’m dying a slow starving death
Emaciated from a life spent without emotion
It is the bread killing me
But I do not know it

Frost Smith’s timeline

August 2022
18 Thu

Anniversary
15 years of membership
August 2017
18 Fri

Anniversary
10 years of membership
August 2012
18 Sat

Anniversary
5 years of membership
February 2012
06 Mon

Received a critique
on Foggy from @Geezer
"of needing to know where and how to separate or combine lines to keep a certain flow. These are just suggestions on how to do it. 1] Treading in the mucus of despairing lungs 2] Frantic to attract a passerby 3] No one n…"
06 Mon

Posted a poem
Foggy
"Treading in the mucus of the lungs of despair"
Open thread 13 lines
March 2010
10 Wed

Received a critique
on Indy-devolution from @weirdelf
"great beginning, reverting ending, not sure what I think of this. Powerful words, profound intent... but then? Interdependent tribes provide a regulating prosthetic Extinction of rational individualization is insufficie…"
10 Wed

Received a critique
on Indy-devolution from @Seren
"Frost ... deeep ... I loved it :) smile will be looking for more from your pen ... shed gills to walk the earth kind regards Jayne-Chloe"
09 Tue

Posted a poem
Indy-devolution
"Legs"
Open thread 14 lines
August 2009
10 Mon

Posted a poem
Outlasting
" "
Open thread 18 lines
August 2008
18 Mon

Anniversary
One year of membership
May 2008
01 Thu

Most-discussed work
Empty Bed

53 critiques to date.
September 2007
15 Sat

Highest posting month
September 2007 — 15 poems
August 2007
20 Mon

First critique offered
on "alone indefinately" by @anonymitylll
20 Mon

First publication
The fog
18 Sat

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 2 days later.