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Frost Smith
Frost Smith
Aug 10, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Outlasting

 

Defeat feigningDeviant SubterfugeListless monster lurking Stifling columniationStrategic mistakes musterEveryone remembers Custer It’s been so longBut still going strongCourageous actionFear’s forlorn Upheaval willUltimately surrender toSteelyResolve
— Frost Smith, Aug 10, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

Frost Smith :)

I dont think I have had the pleasure of your poetry before ... but have to say this is a very powerful write ... even with the custer reference it could be applied to a lot of situations .... awesome write cant see any great flow or grammer problems but then I am still learning lol ... great write ... loved it .. Regards Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ...
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 10 months ago

Frost...

and here you are! poised for us again! a very strong write... one thing... upheaval will, upheaval of will or up heaving will... I'm not sure though... good to see you posting! Richard
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darkangel

16 years 10 months ago

I love your writing style,

I love your writing style, the way you use your words to deliver such a powerful image! Fantastic!!! b~
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 10 months ago

Thems the words that make poetry worth reading,

I have missed you my tough, honest, warrior friend. Second verse rocks. Not sure about the final one, upheaval, change, laughs in the face of steely resolve, but the image is good. Cheers, Jess "The political arena leaves one no alternative, one must either be a dunce or a rogue." Emma Goldman