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Frost Smith
Frost Smith
Mar 09, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Indy-devolution

LegsSpawnedMindlessly –Growing forwardOnly instinct to clawBeaching itself,Rendering once required gills,Useless Corrupted self-actualizationHomeostatic ImbalanceReverting to primordial defenseInterdependent tribes provide a regulating prostheticExtinction of rational individualization
— Frost Smith, Mar 09, 2010

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Seren

Seren

16 years 3 months ago

Frost … deeep … I loved

Frost ... deeep ... I loved it :) smile will be looking for more from your pen ... shed gills to walk the earth kind regards Jayne-Chloe
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 3 months ago

yes and...?

great beginning, reverting ending, not sure what I think of this. Powerful words, profound intent... but then? Interdependent tribes provide a regulating prosthetic Extinction of rational individualization is insufficient information Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible